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Four dungeon explorers. An unseen trap. A casual betrayal. A casual snack.

I like how this story turned out and I'd like to do more with these characters and this setting in the future.

The idea for this story came to me when I was giving a prompt for a request stream that  Scottglass was putting on for his Discord server. This very same request is where the thumbnail is taken from. You can find the full results of this stream right here:
https://aryion.com/g4/view/1072841

The stream was funded by  justanothermeal

If you're interested in Scott's work, you can join his Patreon here:
https://www.patreon.com/scotts_sanctuary

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AnAccount

Posted by AnAccount 5 months ago Report

Death was pretty peak. Really enjoyed the way the party talked about phoebes situation in the immediate aftermath.

TETRO

Posted by TETRO 5 months ago Report

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for being specific about what you liked about it. I wasn't sure if the Mother Death section would be a bit weird for some people, but it's something I really wanted to add.

The dialogue right after Phoebe was eaten was basically the starting point of the story. It was the original core concept that I wrote everything else around. I thought it was a hot idea for the other party members to just be kind of annoyed with Vana but ultimately realize that they need to just move on and let the naga have her meal.

AnAccount

Posted by AnAccount 4 months ago Report

The death concept was very generous and just sounded like a sweet deal overall. Your core concept was really good, I only wish they did more discussing. Thank you for writing it

Jacj55

Posted by Jacj55 4 months ago Report

This was a great story. I hope you write more because I missed your writing.

TETRO

Posted by TETRO 4 months ago Report

Thank you! That really means a lot to me. I hope to have something new up here again before TOO long.