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Starlight Glimmer has never forgiven Twilight for ruining her little utopia. She discovers a spell that allows her to devour the rulers of Equestria and absorb their powers. Of course, she doesn’t hesitate to use it the very same day she found it…
All characters in this story are fictional and over the legal age of consent.
This story is a commission I wrote for Superfun on FA
If you want to commission a story from me – check out the Commission Info on RedNastyFox.com! Feel free to boop me anytime – I’m always open to new clients! ;)
Cover Artwork is a screenshot from original MLP FiM show, Season 5, Episode 1 – The Cutie Map. I took it from mlp.fandom.com.
If you want to have the best viewing and reading experience and make sure that I will answer your comments, here is a link to Starlight’s Revenge on RedNastyFox.com! I publish my writing and art there earlier than on other platforms. It is optimized for written works and thoroughly preserves the original text formatting. Full resolution images and story files are also available for free download there! ;)
The vast majority of my content is extremely NSFW, so I kindly ask minors to not interact.
Feel free to repost this content on two conditions: credit me as the creator and attach a link to the original post on my website so it can be easily found. I’m a small creator trying to survive in this big and scary world, and I’d appreciate any help with promotion. :3
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Posted by Dinokid11 4 months ago Report
Excellent work
Posted by RedNastyFox 4 months ago Report
Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed it! ^__^
Posted by Confusedbat123 4 months ago Report
Peak
Posted by RedNastyFox 4 months ago Report
Aww, thankies! :3
Posted by Mechdragon1k 4 months ago Report
Considering twilight works extremely hard, might she be spared death, but not spared FUN.
Posted by RedNastyFox 4 months ago Report
I can easily picutre Starlight consuming just Twilight's magic yet keeping her to mock and use as a sex toy. >:3
Though Twilight is too smart and dangerous as she has support among ponies, so a paranoid tyrant like Starlight is unlikely to take this much risk, especially after Twilight had already defeated her once.
Anyway, the commissioner will have the final word in how the plot will develop or if there will be a sequel at all, but I surely enjoyed writing this story and hope to continue it one way or another. :D
Posted by TheCoolestdude 4 months ago Report
Please make a sequel
Posted by RedNastyFox 4 months ago Report
Hehe, I'm glad that you enjoyed the story so much! :3
We have already planned the sequel together with the commissioner, but it will likely be done after New Year.
You may look through the other MLP stories in my gallery meanwhile, this is the one I'm proud of:
https://aryion.com/g4/view/1027702
Posted by TheCoolestdude 4 months ago Report
Does Starlight have wings?
Posted by RedNastyFox 4 months ago Report
Of course she does, she is an alicorn now after all! :3
Posted by TheCoolestdude 4 months ago Report
Will she go after the rest of the Mane 6?
Posted by RedNastyFox 4 months ago Report
We currently planned only the sequel with her eating Twilight, so it depends on the commissioner. But it surely sounds logical since all of them took part in ruining Starlight's town.
Posted by TheCoolestdude 4 months ago Report
There is another threat.
(Does this take place before the Changelings reformed or after?)
Posted by RedNastyFox 4 months ago Report
I think before.
Posted by TheCoolestdude 4 months ago Report
The threat I was referring to was Discord. He will be more dangerous when he finds out the girls especially Fluttershy got eaten.
(https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=OYmnIUdclyY&pp=ygUWbWxwIGRpc2NvcmQgY2hhbmdlbGluZw%3D%3D Notice Discord went from yawning to very serious when he realized Fluttershy was taken)
Don't you agree?
Posted by TheCoolestdude 4 months ago Report
Does she gain her victims' talents?
Posted by RedNastyFox 4 months ago Report
Yep, as well as their cutie marks.
Posted by TheCoolestdude 4 months ago Report
And who will she marry?
Posted by RedNastyFox 4 months ago Report
Sunburst, obviously, whether he wants it or not :D
Posted by TheCoolestdude 4 months ago Report
Another option is Trixie.
Posted by RedNastyFox 4 months ago Report
Like I said, it depends on the commissioner. ;)
Posted by TheCoolestdude 4 months ago Report
Do you understand why I said that?
Posted by RedNastyFox 4 months ago Report
Not really, since I don't do requests and it's specified on my profile page.
Posted by TheCoolestdude 4 months ago Report
They have something in common. Guess what it is.