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Merry Christmas. Man, it's been a long while since I've posted something from this series, huh? Sorry that it's fallen by the wayside, I do want to continue it, but just haven't been able to find the motivation to do it. Forced myself to finish this chapter for Christmas since I felt as if if I let this rot for too long I'd just never get back to it, and this seemed fitting as a Christmas gift to all of you. That said though, this one isn't exactly up to my standards, so I'm sorry if the wait was disappointing. Might rewrite this one at some point. Also thinking about writing a non-loli version of this chapter, plus an intermission between arcs 2 and 3 for Subaru to enjoy his time with RBD and all the wonderful stomachs he has access to.
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Posted by Perodian 4 months ago Report
Wasn't expecting to see this story update. You don't need to force yourself to write, but it is nice to see the result. It's interesting to see how you progress the story while maintaining the vore aspects.
Posted by Randomusernom 4 months ago Report
Main thing is Daphne has so little vore content of her given her nature, and I REALLY want to do something with her later in this series. So I want to continue, I really do, this chapter kind of just got left by the wayside. Hopefully arc 3 is more fun to write.
Posted by absolute 4 months ago Report
Ngl i am fascinated by how the canon subaru's would react to this one XD
Posted by absolute 4 months ago Report
Well.. the canon one and the IF variants XD
Posted by Randomusernom 4 months ago Report
As fond as I am of Preybaru, I can't really see any of his more canon counterparts looking at him with anything other than disgust.
Posted by absolute 4 months ago Report
Absolutely XD. I can imagine canon and sloth just beathing the ahit out of him in an alley with ram joining in outta nowhere XD
Posted by Randomusernom 4 months ago Report
No matter how hard Ram kicks him, and won't compare to the punishment her stomach can deal out.
Posted by absolute 4 months ago Report
Pfft yeah. I am wondering though, if all the subaru's got to read this with preybaru in another room, which one would be the one to get up to try and kill preybaru first XD
Posted by Randomusernom 4 months ago Report
My personal bet is either Wrath or Pride. Sloth isn't violent enough, I doubt Gluttony would care too much about another version of Subaru, Greed would just have Echidna getting way too curious about how this world works to let him do anything, and canon I also just can't see getting angry enough to actually try and kill him. I'm just not sure who'd do it faster, Pride or Wrath.
Posted by absolute 4 months ago Report
Pfft definitely pride i believe. He actually did what he did because of how much he activly wanted to see emilia succeed. This subaru seemingly more just sees emilia as a pleasure object, a goal.
Posted by absolute 4 months ago Report
Well... at least thats what i beleive to be prides motive
Posted by Randomusernom 4 months ago Report
You know, that actually just gives me the idea of Subaru ranking all the girls by how pleasurable their stomachs are to him and then treating them accordingly
Posted by absolute 4 months ago Report
Pffft, happy to know i inspired you XD. Maybe he can write a small journal in his spare time about it just for notes. And maybe someone else can find it leading to utter confusion depending on if he wrote in japanese or the new worlds language. One would definitely be more confusing than the other XD
Posted by Randomusernom 4 months ago Report
Most curious about how Ram would respond to it. Both confusion at how the hell he knows all this information, but also confusion at why the hell hers is at the bottom. She doesn't know whether to be disgusted or flattered XD
Posted by Randomusernom 4 months ago Report
*Isn't
Posted by absolute 4 months ago Report
Pffft, well... thats for you to interpret should you use this idea XD