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Hey first story of the New year, It know it should've been out at the end of the year but we don't talk about that.
Andrastea and Gabriella belong to
Contrary13
Fay belongs to FNman
Brandy Belongs to
PubbyNyanDs
Rose Belongs to a friend on Discord
And finally Moon belongs to me
Don't use any of the characters without our permission
(Thoughts and feed back on the story is always welcome)
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Posted by doomed 3 months ago Report
only advice is to space out the paragraphs to make reading easier. its all clumped together so its harder to read. also you use "would" a little too much and in the wrong places and the wrong context
Posted by biscuitman 3 months ago Report
That scans, Thank you for the feed back.