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An overdue unbirth story that I got slightly inspired by reading about the SCP fandom.
I always wanted to do something resembling it, but didn't want to go through the hassle of creating a new SCP entry.
So I decided to make up one.
The requester decided to remain anonymous.
As always, please suggest tags in case I missed any.
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Posted by TheWanderingTrio 3 months ago Report
I can't help but feel childish whenever I come across the word "Redacted" and trying to figure out a cuss word to replace with it. Doesn't always work but man is it goofy fun to be had.
As for the actual story, it's really interesting as I can't wait to hopefully see where this story continues.
Posted by Personad 3 months ago Report
lol, I just tried to do it and it is fun.
Glad I could peak your interests. Where the story goes depends on the requester.
Or I can come up with more tales involving UBMC (Unbirthing Birthing Motherly Creatures) entities.
Posted by Sky0711 3 months ago Report
Dude. This is Incredible! I can't wait to read more about this story and where it will lead!
Posted by Personad 3 months ago Report
I'm glad you liked it!
If the requester wishes to add more about Beatrix, then you will see much more.
If not, then maybe I can come up with more UBMC entities.
Posted by RaeThePrey 3 months ago Report
What's the picture in the thumbnail, could you link please?
Posted by Personad 3 months ago Report
Let me DM you.
Posted by DragonMaster888123 3 months ago Report
Me too please. Also great work!!! Love to see more.
Posted by Personad 3 months ago Report
Thanks!
I will DM it to you.
Posted by Sanserror 3 months ago Report
Are willing to send it to me also.
Posted by Theonewhooverseesall 3 months ago Report
Hey im sorry if im being impatient or anything but are you gonna do my request soon
Posted by Personad 3 months ago Report
Hopefully by the end of the month if i'm lucky.
Posted by Personad 3 months ago Report
Check your dms when you get the chance.
Posted by Theonewhooverseesall 3 months ago Report
I did
Posted by Personad 3 months ago Report
Did you get the story?
Posted by Theonewhooverseesall 3 months ago Report
Yeah
Posted by Personad 3 months ago Report
So should I post the finished one?
Posted by Theonewhooverseesall 3 months ago Report
Sure
Posted by Elpie 3 months ago Report
constructive criticism time: no problems with the story itself, but it feels like some scenes are missing--it suddenly comes up that they took a bath together when that was never detailed before that point, for example
Posted by Personad 3 months ago Report
Ah, good catch.
The requester said that they didn't want the story to go on for too long. Otherwise I would have included scenes such as them arriving at Beatrix's apartment, them taking a bath together, or even leaving hints of Beatrix's true motive.
Posted by ggdsfgddfgfdgfgd 1 month ago Report
Question what dose ubmc stand for
Posted by Personad 1 month ago Report
UBMC (Unbirthing and/or Birthing Motherly Creatures)
An obvious playoff of SCP.
Just didn't want to create an SCP and come up with this.
May do more later.