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Tags: cruel observer Cruel Pred Digestion Disposal Dragon pred Dragon Vore dragon/human F/F F/FF F/M f/mm f/multiple Fatal Female Pred Female Prey Giantess Giantess Vore hesitant pred Human Pred Human Prey Macro/Micro Male Prey mind break observer Oral Vore sister sister pred Size difference Soft Vore Stomach Story Swallowed alive taunting pred Teasing Pred toilet disposal Uncaring Observers Uncaring Pred Unwilling Prey Willing Pred
A shrunken group of friends are spending their evening playing your typical nerdy table-top role-playing game but with a little twist: It's hardcore. Your character falls and hits their head? Then you're gonna have to feel that pain as well! ...Now of course there are limits to how far the this group of nerds is willing to take it, but what happens when you mix a misbehaving new player and an ill-tempered Game Master who is being forced to let his giantess sister play along?
I live. I was planning for this story to be a "quick" one, so I aimed for it to be under 10k words. Let's just say I failed miserably because it is offically my second longest story on this website. Coming in at 27,500 words. :) Whoops. Anyway, I think the extra writing helps with the build up, but of course if you disagree, feel free to let me know in the comments. Oh and don't take this story seriously, its rather silly, but I do admit that I tried to make it 'somewhat' grounded and believable. I wrote this story as a break from my other ongoing series. I plan to try finish the sequel to 'Her Deadly Desire' next or possibly VU6. All characters in this story are 18+.
As always, I'd love to hear what you think of this story if you have the time. I appreciate all comments and welcome critism. Although I write these stories for myself mainly, I promise you that I change how and what I write depending on the feedback I get in the comments of my stories. Cheers and enjoy!
To make it clear for those who want to know before reading the story: There is macro/micro female pred vore but also regular dragon vore on normal sized human prey.
For reference, if needed:
Ian – Game Master
Megan - Mimi Copperheart - Halfling Rogue
Ashton - Arius the Wise - Gnome Wizard
Fiona - Fae Youngspring - Elf Druid
Jason - Hank - Human Warrior
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Posted by Cassss 2 months ago Report
Amazing. Every story is better than the last.
Posted by iliketoread 2 months ago Report
Thanks! I hope so!
Posted by AlbertKwon9182 2 months ago Report
It’s always great to see giantess stories from you! Your descriptions and character dynamics between giantess and poor tinies are simply magical. Roleplaying for Tinies. What a lovely concept! Fantasy and somewhat fantasy-esque settings for giantess vore/scat stories got real gems for sure, I think. Look forward to reading your story! Yay!
Posted by AlbertKwon9182 2 months ago Report
This was a great read! I love how at the end of the story, the Tremblay's were rather casual about the tragic fate of the little tinies! Mrs. Tremblay's youthful history with certain little tiny was a great sub-story also! I don't think I've ever seen the family of the giantess to be this chill about consumption and digestion of poor tinies. The entire dinner scene was pure gold. Great work! Really loved the ending of this story too. Zoey's uncaring attitude toward poor tinies (or just "logs") were beyond amazing! Especially what Zoey did with her new phone XD That was a real nice touch!
Posted by iliketoread 2 months ago Report
Thanks! Yeah the dinner scene was pretty fun to write, I do want to try make something in a similar vein in the future. And glad you enjoyed the disposal scene at the end, I wasn't going to add it originally but knew people would enjoy it so I did. Cheers!
Posted by Adder4118 2 months ago Report
Thumbnail picture? Or is it private
Posted by iliketoread 2 months ago Report
The thumbnail is a picture I put together using various images from the internet.
Posted by TinyHunter 2 months ago Report
Oh shit, this ruled!
Admittedly at first I wasn't sure about this conceit for a story, it felt like the eventual vore scene was going to be too much of a leap, but you really pulled it off! In fact, I even found myself kinda sucked in to the fantasy/roleplay side of the story, I thought you did a really good job with your descriptions; it was just enough to really paint a picture without it overstaying its welcome. A really good balance.
Oh, and the ending bit with the reveal about the parents...love that kind of stuff. Never saw it coming but it felt so perfect in a story like this.
I think this one is right up there with the original Vore University as a favorite for me from you!
Posted by iliketoread 2 months ago Report
Oh man my editor was roasting me on being overly descriptive, I had to cut back a lot. I'm glad you feel like there was a good balance, makes me feel like the story ended up in a reasonable state.
And hell yeah, finding out mom participated in such a depraved activity is way too fun to not write.
O.O "Up there with the original Vore University as a favorite"? Coming from you that means a lot so thank you. Been worried recently about the quality of my stories lol. Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment, I eagerly look forward to any new stories you end up posting... Cheers!
Posted by TinyHunter 2 months ago Report
I think the work you did with your editor paid off. On a technical level I would say this feels like your best written story. Vore University might barely edge it out for my personal favorite because I tend to prefer simple vore stories like that, but it really says something about your improvement over time that something a bit more high concept/contrived like this has me guessing! Good job.
And yeah, hopefully I thaw out soon and get back to writing when the weather warms up...for some reason I never feel like writing in the winter lol.
Posted by Animo24 2 months ago Report
Amazing story for real and the lenght is not a problem at all you are a master at balancing this out perfectly
Posted by iliketoread 2 months ago Report
Sweet. It's nice to know that the length of the story worked out. Thanks for the comment!
Posted by doomed 2 months ago Report
good job . ian is a psychopath and zoey is an opportunistic bitch
Posted by iliketoread 2 months ago Report
Dude, tell me about it. The person who proofread the story tried to convince me to kill off Ian cause he's such a psychopathic asshole. Which I mean, fair, but my stories tend to let the bad people win... And yeah, Zoey is an opportunistic bitch but she's hot so it's okay, right?
Thanks!
Posted by doomed 2 months ago Report
personally i wouldve killed off ian and made jason more of a douche then escape. that way you get to keep the horrible guy alive and kill off another horrible guy too.
and nah zoey isnt hot enough XD
Posted by akinata 2 months ago Report
someone finally made a lengthy story about a vore DnD session. it was about time.^^
what i like with your stories is that i can happily read it all without the need to check the vore part beforehand because i know it is going to be good.
even when there is alot to read before getting to the vore.
and good it was! better, great.. amazing!
Posted by iliketoread 2 months ago Report
I know right!?! I've always wanted to read a lengthy vore story revolving around a DnD session! (Of course there may be some really good same size stories but I'm not into that. And if there are some good macro/micro ones, I probably missed them). Its a really fun theme to write around even though its exhausting to keep two perspectives alongside one another.
I'm grateful to hear you trust my writing enough to put yourself blindly through a story with 27k words. I appreciate it. Thanks!
Posted by Moonlightshadow 2 months ago Report
Man, I am a so dissapointed in Ian u _u
Despite his many failings as GM, he did managed to have a very... 'immersive' campaing. A little too much in fact. Yet, the last surviving player managed to still win game! Ian then could have next campaing, after the eaten players managed to get out of stomach of dead dragon, and go on next adventure! Likely to ressurect the exploded fighter whom would have been humbled by his experience.
Like, sure. After managing to get his sister to vomit them out. They would likely want chaperone on the next game even if they would later decided it was all epic.
<.<
If they would want to have any next game.
...Except Ian decided to blew it all and ask his sister to eat last player and digest him along with all his friends who would have been collateral damage.
And even still, there was a so long time period where it could still be salvageable.
Posted by iliketoread 2 months ago Report
Ian really did ruin everything huh. But sometimes even I wonder who the real badguy in this story was. Ian? Jason? Zoey? Not sure...
But yeah it would have been interesting to not have the ending be fatal to the tiny characters. I do honestly see the appeal in a non-fatal scenario where the group play with Zoey and she occasionally eats them (but throws them up later) Some true hardcore tabletop roleplaying there. I personally would participate in such an activity LOL.
I suppose Ian was just too angry at Jason to want any other outcome...
Thanks for leaving the comment, I appreciate it!
Posted by TheRumblinger 2 months ago Report
great story as usual! I love your works
keep doing it ^^
Posted by iliketoread 2 months ago Report
Thanks! Glad to know you enjoyed it!
Posted by hatter 2 months ago Report
Really unique premise, executed well. I always find it difficult to properly motivate bigs to eat tinies, but this case is nightmare difficulty, with one tiny being her brother and him being friends with (most of) the others. It's still hard for me to believe Ian would act like that! But I've noticed your tinies tend to be more evil to each other than usual, it's kinda your thing!
The roleplay sections were well done too and I laughed when their vivid imaginations continued working even after she started eating them...
Posted by iliketoread 2 months ago Report
My tinies are kinda evil huh... I suppose I need them to be in order to get my deranged plots to go through with some semblance of reason.
Nice to hear you feel that the roleplaying sections were well done! Appreciate you taking the time to read the story and comment!
Posted by vl444 2 months ago Report
This Turned out awesome, and so many opportunities for a sequel.
Does Ian Get mad with power befriending tinies to feed to his sister? Or Does Zoey find the loophole, Her dad said SHE Couldn't Eat him, But I'm sure she has a few hot hungry friends That wouldnt mind a taste.
Posted by iliketoread 2 months ago Report
All very good questions to ponder. Glad you liked it!
Posted by blab123 2 months ago Report
I'll be honest, I was a bit uncertain of the scenario towards the beginning, mostly due to having never played DnD before, but I have to say you nailed it once again with the vore scenes, especially Ashton's; a giantess struggling to swallow someone yet being determined to do it anyway is something I'll never get tired of. Megan's (un?)willing arousal at being tasted was pretty fun too, and I certainly felt the most bad for her out of all of the tinies, and the variety added by Fiona's forcefulness was a nice touch too, it really helped each vore sequence feel special. I also really liked Fiona's little backstory, and I can't help but wonder why whoever failed to keep her down before never tried again, although given that she was younger at the time, it wouldn't surprise me if whoever did it felt guilty afterwards or was quite young and thus lost interest afterwards.
As for the family, talk about a little gang of psychopaths, from Zoey using actual fire (Fiona was very lucky to survive that IMO), plus, you know, eating four people, Ian willing to kill his friends just to see one guy dead, and the parents' little backstory and ultimately dismissive attitude towards the fates of those poor tinies. Pretty solid story overall, and as always I look forward to whatever you put out next!
Posted by iliketoread 2 months ago Report
Glad to know that the story was still enjoyable even for those who aren't familiar with tabletop roleplaying games. I tried to keep tabletop rules and formalities simple/ignored; So that they were more flavour than anything else.
And yeah the family is truly a rather psychotic group of individuals... Only after finishing writing the story did I realize just how deranged that family of characters is. But I needed their morals aside to have the good stuff happen, as is the way when writing these unhinged vore stories.
Thanks for the kind comment, appreciate it!
Posted by Goliath1221 2 weeks ago Report
I like the conflict when there are feelings involved like in Jack and Emma, who although they loved each other, she was about to swallow him. I would like to see something similar in a second part with these two siblings (Ian being older and no longer a child) where his sister in another role-playing game considered swallowing him or eating him, but I expelled him because she wants him.
Posted by iliketoread 12 days ago Report
Yeah I like those kinds of conflicts as well in these type of stories. Not quite sure if we're gonna see a sequel or continuation to this particular story but I'll definitely be trying to put those types of conflicts in future writing.
Thanks!