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Another comm from the wonderful  unicorn following Cailey, a smart albino kangaroo girl that gets to watch a rather... unique class demonstration, and can't help but want to learn more intimately...

Hello! It's been a little bit since my last story, on account of, uh, I got sick over the new year and it's been hanging around and annoying me since! But I finally got this comm done, which was a lot of fun, and I hope you all enjoy! Got at least one more project to do now that I'm done with this one, to keep this random m/f streak that I've got going going... who knows what comes after that! ...Maybe something with a slime girl, I had an interesting idea while I was writing this...

Anyways, I hope you enjoyed reading, and have a happy and horny day!

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Hansony

Posted by Hansony 3 months ago Report

To me this sort of story have the focus all wrong.
A lot of intro to the characters and the setting, the dynamic in the class and all that, but a total of 6 paragraphs about the actual digestion and no mention of what the teacher ended up using the load she made for... those are the parts I am most interested in.
Also I would have preferred a much slower digestion process, at the very least lasting most of the school day...

Of cause that is just MY preference, if the person who commissioned this piece was asking for this sort of story or if that is the story of story you prefer making, that is just a case of me not being the intended audience and that is perfectly fair, but to me this story is like a sandwich that have a great bread, a bit too much salad, good amounts of dressing and half a slice of bacon... The thing I look for in a story just isn't here.

soullesschao

Posted by soullesschao 3 months ago Report

I enjoyed it.

PaperWriter

Posted by PaperWriter 3 months ago Report

:)

Xaxis

Posted by Xaxis 3 months ago Report

Context is everything, and this story is such a treat for that. Excellent work!

PaperWriter

Posted by PaperWriter 2 months ago Report

Thank you! ^^

Person955

Posted by Person955 2 months ago Report

Amazing~!

PaperWriter

Posted by PaperWriter 2 months ago Report

Thank you! :)

pickyswitch

Posted by pickyswitch 1 month ago Report

Hmmmmph, love watching prey with good prospects get sloshed like that!

PaperWriter

Posted by PaperWriter 1 month ago Report

Gotta love some wasted potential~