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Hey everyone, after a really long time lurking. I decided to try and write something and to my surprise I actually enjoyed it.
I typed it all out on deviantART and decided I should probably post it in a more fitting place. This is my first time really writing anything besides a d&d campaign pot line. So I would really appreciate any tips.
A quick synopsis I guess:
The narrator is thinking back to when their girlfriend, decided she would rather be their pet dog than a person. And when woman shows up at their doorstep asking to be their pet cat. Something takes a hold of her.
Posted by DoggyTreat003 2 months ago Report
sorry for the multi post im new to this and it said to failed
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Posted by Spottythedragonwolf 2 months ago Report
You do know a I art is banned
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Posted by DoggyTreat003 2 months ago Report
Ummmm....I'm not posting art. This is a story, I'm just using it as a thumbnail. And so many people on the site do the same thing that there's a tag for.
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Posted by Spottythedragonwolf 2 months ago Report
Ah I see, you’re just the first person I’ve seen use it, figured thumbnails fall into the same thing
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Posted by sheppard74 2 months ago Report
For a first publish here, its a good one
Story is entertaining and the vore scene is hot.
Definitily a base to build upon.
A few typos here and there (maybe run it by Grammerly for spell checking)
About the AI-Atmrt Thumbnail. As a Thumbnail its allowed, but make sure you have the tag for it in and maybe a a small line in the story description.
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Posted by Snakk 2 months ago Report
I loved this idea. Dogs eating cats is super fun. Dog girls eating cat girls is an entertaining twist.
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Posted by EloquentOrc 2 months ago Report
A solid first story.
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Posted by harpylove 1 month ago Report
Great story! I just finished this one and am excited to see her future meals as well!
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Posted by DoggyTreat003 1 month ago Report
Thanks I'm glad you enjoyed it. And if you haven't seen it yet I have a story with a harpy pred too.
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Posted by harpylove 1 month ago Report
Great, I’ll have to give it a read too!
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