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Elyon, Nina, Xantos and Yuna are back on the road in search for Nina's missing mother. But while queen Meleri's the whereabouts still is unsure, the group encounter a village where few dare walking down to the river anymore in fear of being eaten. What lurks in its cold depths?
It has been a long while since I last wrote for my Xantos series and I hope you will forgive me. This chapter is mostly a build-up for the next one which will come sooner rather than later : )
Please leave a review and tell me what you think.
Posted by johaku99 2 months ago Report
A good build up chapter i love that xantos idea for bait is nude in ely9n
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Posted by Nalzindar 2 months ago Report
Thanks. Xantos' main objective for most things involving Elyon is of erotic nature XD
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Posted by PrinnyDood 2 months ago Report
Nice, another chapter!
Good stuff here! I like how you describe the water serpents especially - that vibe of something large and predatory lurking invisible below the surface really sets a tense atmosphere. Good thing they have a dragon to poke into helping. xD
I'm curious how this will go! I wonder how good a swimmer Xantos is? In spite of being (presumably) far tougher than the serpents in a fight, if they're as quick and slippery as you'd expect of such creatures, I'm not sure he could catch & root them all out.
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Posted by Nalzindar 2 months ago Report
Thanks. I enjoy scenarios which involves a big, and an even bigger predator who can play on each other's dynamics. Xantos will in most cases be the biggest and strongest one, but I will challenge that on later occasions. I had your hydra in mind when writing about the serpents, and the way the lurk in the water to ambush their do set the mood^^
I hope to have the continuation finished in a relatively short time to answer your other questions : )
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