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The final hours arrive, and Fionn and Sarah must now decide how they choose to see each other for the last time. For each of them, their relationship has not diminished but heightened. Sometimes in terrifying ways. Now, all of these feelings, urges, and desires spill out. Whatever the cost.
There is a good deal of horror to this section driven mostly by yandere predator tendencies. Be aware.
If you’ve stuck through the end, thank you so much. This story meant an enormous amount to me. I put a lot of emotional labor into this, and it is a story that meant a lot to me to complete. So I am very glad I get to share it with you. I truly hope you enjoyed it!
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Posted by StrawberryStereo 1 month ago Report
You're an excellent writer! It's very refreshing to read something so descriptive and eloquent on here. I must admit that I have not read the other parts of the story in full, but this one had my full attention. I have a soft spot for obsessive, possessive predators and this DEFINITELY ticks those boxes.
Posted by Belloc 1 month ago Report
Ah thank you very much! I truly appreciate that and I'm very happy you enjoyed it so much. ^^
Posted by StrawberryStereo 1 month ago Report
Enough that I've come back multiple times to reread it. That's the tell for me that I really like a piece of writing! Anyway, the praise is much deserved!
Posted by Isabelly 1 month ago Report
This was incredible. The ending was incredible too. The contrast of how charitable and loving she is in her cassette vs her horrifying last moments trying to escape him.
And I love how his hunger is so driven with the sole wish to love her forever and to keep her. I love, love, love a possesive, love-stricken predator. It seems you and I have a very similar taste!
~“Sarah. I don’t blame you at all,” he said. He held up his right hand. “You’re doing such a human thing, but even this is only you. Only you would go this far. Fight this hard. God, I love you. I would eat my way through a thousand worlds for you. I would eat stars for you. I will carry you with me until this planet is nothing but a skein of mud and fire. We will be so happy. We will always be so happy, Sarah.”~
I loved this passage so much. I loved how tender and gentle he behaved and felt, when the reality was an absolute horror fest and nightmare. I live for contrasts like this. Probably my favorite written fetish piece now.
Posted by Belloc 1 month ago Report
Thank you so so much for the kind words! Seriously, that truly means a lot. ^^
I absolutely agree that that contrast, that mix, is SUCH a good one. Having a contrast between love, affection, desire, and their horrifying, consuming expression is exactly the sort of thing I enjoy exploring. A predator being driven by a love that the prey cannot negotiate with is just incredible. It lets you explore such extreme heights of how far the pred will be willing to go. And for the poor prey being the target of that, it's "victim" even if what they are being victimized by is an all-devouring love FOR THEM... ahh, I love it!
Posted by Isabelly 1 month ago Report
Yes!