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Our friends have finally made it to Porto, the capital of Usuwa. Elyon and Nina enters the city and has to find a place to stay before their search for Elyon's mother can start. Xantos do also has to find a place to stay, preferably without humans, but if there already are humans on the place you have marked for your hiding spot, it is best to get rid of them first...
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Posted by johaku99 1 month ago Report
Love this xantos claming the manor was great as was the rest of the chapter
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Posted by Nalzindar 1 month ago Report
Thanks, I'm happy to hear you like it :D
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Posted by DrakentheBlack 1 month ago Report
I half expected a "Dragon and the Harem" scenario with Xantos getting stuck half way through the barn door after eating so much.
It's funny how in so many fantasy settings, there's one character in power wielding it for their own purposes, and another character who is trying to conquer/reclaim that power. And it's all up to the author which of those two characters is the hero, and which is the villain.
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Posted by Nalzindar 4 weeks ago Report
I listened to a podcast about the history of England the other day, and the host told that in medieval times when it came to law, justice and power, the difference between a noble and a crook was as thin as a sigarett paper!
I haven't gone especially deep into the lore, customs or culture in this fantasy world, but for most people, one ruler is little different from the other when it comes to how they exercise their power. The only one who potentially has the ability to change this is Elyon, though any change won't be easy with such friends...
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Posted by PrinnyDood 4 weeks ago Report
Another nice chapter!
I always approve a mass vore sequence, and Xantos taking over the manor was a fine example of that. Even if he's very polite to Elyon and Nina (by dragon standards! xD) he's certainly not abandoning his basic nature.
Also, I was wondering what Ionait was up to! She's a devious one, and I'm very curious how she'll impact the story as she once more makes her influence known.
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Posted by Nalzindar 4 weeks ago Report
I'm delighted to hear so^^
Mass vore is indeed one of my favorites too, and when I don't have other beasts at hand, Xantos is fortunately easy enough to put into a fitting role.
Ionait's main motives has been a problem for me for a long time. She is always lurking in the background, but except from her hatred for Xantos, which I managed to explain when Elyon was abducted, I haven't managed to find a proper opportunity to reveal her main plot before now. Even still, the revelation was less dramatic than I hoped for. Fortunately, she will play a little larger role in this rescue ark.
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