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Grudges can be a dangerous thing on both sides. You obviously don't want to be on the wrong side of a pred with a vendetta. But maybe even worse is to hold a grudge between you and someone who actually wants to help.

Now, I know what you're thinking. Releasing a chapter on *this* date? You've seen this before! It's another joke chapter, right? Or maybe there's another secret joke code hidden somewhere? Well, *I* won't tell you. You'll have to try and figure it out yourself. Though, I will say, if this *was* just a normal chapter, then digging through to find some hidden gag that doesn't exist would make you seem pretty foolish this April.

As always, this lovely vore-filled dramatic moment was co-created with the considerably creative  x9comega. This was just the latest chapter in our tasty tale of trauma and friendship. If you want to read the full series, you can find it here:
https://aryion.com/g4/view/569713

And if you want to yell at me for that terrible attempt at alliteration, or grill me on where the hidden joke is in this chapter because you're sure it's got to be in there somewhere, you can do it on Discord! We have an official HNTBL Discord server! You can even talk to the co-creator and a bunch of other readers too, if you want. Here's the link:
https://discord.gg/3g8EmEjmnF

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Perodian

Posted by Perodian 1 month ago Report

Eating someone because they're smarter than you is just cold…blooded. Viper should know that won't help him learn anything.

Wolfsage

Posted by Wolfsage 1 month ago Report

Isn't that the general behaviour of bullies? Taking their failures out on others?

doomed

Posted by doomed 1 month ago Report

im glad jack finally grew the sense to not try to apologize while bringing their mutual friends killer. the olive branch of the potion was great too.
also poor alexander, too bad humans are so subjugated that no one will try to free him. its not like hes gonna instantly die

Mechdragon1k

Posted by Mechdragon1k 1 month ago Report

That does mean if Jack or Fiona tries to save him, their still be time.

Kasra

Posted by Kasra 1 month ago Report

Is the April Fool's prank in the room with us right now? The world may never know...

1ring42

Posted by 1ring42 1 month ago Report

Dang quite the april fools joke

Wolfsage

Posted by Wolfsage 1 month ago Report

I've been a bit sick all day, so it's nice to relax and read something.

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 1 month ago Report

Glad I could help improve your day. And isn’t it nice not to have to wait three months? Hope you feel better soon.

Wolfsage

Posted by Wolfsage 1 month ago Report

I do like not having to wait too long, but I also know writing is hard work. While I have never released anything, I have been working on several stories since 2003, so quite a long time. I can never seem to get anywhere, and I keep getting more and more ideas that I focus, on, neglecting the previous one. So...

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 1 month ago Report

Wow, that is quite a long time. "The perfect is the enemy of the good" as they say, hope you manage to get *something* released (assuming you want to have your content released).

2Ron2R

Posted by 2Ron2R 1 month ago Report

I tend to have the same problems with writing, though the past two years I haven't been able to find the time or mood to write at all.

Wolfsage

Posted by Wolfsage 1 month ago Report

Actually, I'm facing that problem right now as well.

5UP3RN0V4

Posted by 5UP3RN0V4 1 month ago Report

While it ain't no April Fools joke chapter... it's still a great chapter.

Hats off to the creators of the story.

Shadow0000

Posted by Shadow0000 1 month ago Report

So Ozzy is getting a front row scene of what happens to a marked human...wonder how that's going to play in the next chapter?

Silent_eric

Posted by Silent_eric 1 month ago Report

Wow, I bet Viper will feel really bad about Alexander's sick burn on him, if he had a brain bigger than a walnut.
It feels like its been a while since we've had just a straight up bad person bully character hasn't it? Grizz got a sympathetic backstory, Petal is kinda funny about it, and even Pyre complemented Jack in the end. But Viper just seems like a dumb, bad, spiteful person.
And he doesn't even have the common decency to be a hot snake lady instead of a dude! Laaaaame! Someone give this guy detention so Ms. Garfeline can have a filling snack.

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 1 month ago Report

Yeah! you tell him! Just... maybe make sure he's not in earshot when you do. I think he's the kind to hold grudges.

2Ron2R

Posted by 2Ron2R 1 month ago Report

I noticed it didn't seem to get mentioned that ectotherms, pound for pound, need to eat less (or less often) than endotherms. Though in Viper's case I don't think he cares about getting fat.

It would be funny if that ended up being his downfall, getting too fat and sluggish to hunt effectively.

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 1 month ago Report

While I didn't say that specifically in those words, I did say "ectotherms tend to be more efficient with energy usage", which does sort of imply your point. Less energy used means less energy needed.

2Ron2R

Posted by 2Ron2R 1 month ago Report

Looking back at it you got pretty close (to saying it in those words) in paragraph three last sentence, but I think the students would need things spelled out a bit more than that. Especially Viper who demonstrates nicely one the problems with ectothermy, difficulty maintaining the energy levels necessary for a large brain.

5UP3RN0V4

Posted by 5UP3RN0V4 1 month ago Report

So now Jack was able to give Ozzy a sincere apology… especially one in Fiona’s name.

The question is… Will Ozzy find it in his heart to forgive her?

Truth be told, Zach would have wanted Jack and Ozzy to move on, but is that even enough?

I’ll let you judge.

Mechdragon1k

Posted by Mechdragon1k 1 month ago Report

Maybe a wolf can give a snake indigestion, snakes digestion is slow afterall.

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 1 month ago Report

Could be, I suppose. Though from what we've seen, it's pretty tough to give a pred anything but warm fuzzies when you're in their belly.

Mechdragon1k

Posted by Mechdragon1k 1 month ago Report

The idea is actually someone outside the belly doing it.

Mechdragon1k

Posted by Mechdragon1k 1 month ago Report

I wonder if Fiona or one of the many natural predators of snake, can eat viper and digest him before he finishes digesting the prey, before either coughing up the human or giving them the full tour.

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 1 month ago Report

Nah, see, if a warm-blooded pred ate Viper, he'd have PLENTY of warmth to finish digesting his own meal while he himself was digested.

Mechdragon1k

Posted by Mechdragon1k 1 month ago Report

Pred got a real speed digestion challange than, really practice that internal control.

Renarddefox

Posted by Renarddefox 1 month ago Report

forgive me, even if he manages to get out of the Naga's belly, he is still marked, he will end up in the belly of another predator in less time!

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 1 month ago Report

Pretty much. That kid knew he was food, but he went down with dignity.

Mechdragon1k

Posted by Mechdragon1k 1 month ago Report

Hey we got one boy. Who survived being marked

He might of made some burps through but he lived in the end.

harpylove

Posted by harpylove 1 month ago Report

Viper’s first response to the teacher was fantastic. I had to read it twice before I got it though.

Glad Jack and Ozzy are finally taking the first step to recovery. Maybe Fiona will save one of Ozzy’s friends or catch just catch them and let them go to show she really is sorry and looking out for him.

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 1 month ago Report

Hehe, thanks. I hope Ozzy can come to terms with what happened, somehow.

harpylove

Posted by harpylove 1 month ago Report

Fingers crossed.