Posted by Mcleod 16 years ago Report

nice story i really enjoyed it but that because it was a good story...and it also had renamon

Posted by Razure 10 years ago Report

5 years later... I've no idea how I missed this comment, but thank you~

Posted by Fairlyn 14 years ago Report

I liked the story, a lot.

I liked the buildup to the vore part. which was also excellent pulled off.

Posted by Razure 14 years ago Report

Thanks, this was one of the first vore stories I ever wrote, so I'm glad it has stood up to the test of time. (Meaning I wasn't bad when I first started writing >_>)

Posted by Fairlyn 14 years ago Report

I liked this one better than the other one I read. The one with Samus and unbirthed pokemon.

Renamon just felt more alive than those characters. (I was a bit surprised at Rika's reaction...)

Posted by Razure 14 years ago Report

I’m not surprised, the other story you’re referring to was done on more of a whim, whereas anything I do involving Renamon nearly always involves a lot of thought and planning.

Developing her character is more important to me than anything else really, I wanted Renamon to seem ‘alive’, someone with thoughts and emotions; hopefully even to the point where the reader starts rooting for her, and laments when something bad happens; becoming emotionally tied with her. Maybe that’s a bit too much to hope for, but it’s what I’d like to see happen.

As for Rika, that was an honest attempt to make the two of them get along… it didn’t work.

Posted by bluemoon the lucario 14 years ago Report

renamon has always been a favorite of mine actuly i love her but to add charater to something takes time you know (furries unite)!!!

Posted by Razure 14 years ago Report

Adding character to someone is difficult, but it makes them seem so much more alive, making it totally worth it.

And since Renamon is, without question, my favorite character, it's a labor of love to use that extra effort to make her 'real'

Posted by keyblademark 14 years ago Report

awesome beginning :)

Posted by Razure 14 years ago Report

Thank you :3

Posted by keyblademark 14 years ago Report

you are welcome :)

Posted by Jesseman1 10 years ago Report

Is guilmon really that stupid that he would think nothing would happen to his tamer? I swear when I read that part I wanted to bitch slap that damn retard! I mean honestly, this story just makes guilmon seem like the stupidest thing in existance! >:(

Posted by Razure 10 years ago Report

If I can remember my thought process from way back then...
Guilmon knew what would happen to Takato, he just didn't care, his hunger overrode his ability to think logically.
I dunno though, it was a very long time ago, I was more interested in writing vore than making sense of it.

Posted by Jesseman1 10 years ago Report

I still wanna bitch slap him for being such a self-centred, gluttonous ass-hole.

Posted by TheGleamEyes 10 years ago Report

Perfect karma... That's I've got to say...

Posted by Razure 10 years ago Report

Heh, that's one way to look at it.

Posted by ShieUne 3 years ago Report

Coming back all these year's later and still just as good as I remember.