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While bearing an odd name (I'm not very good at naming stories), this is without a doubt one of the favorite vore stories I've ever done. I put a lot of work into it—more than I put into chapters of my normal fanfics even—and it pays off big time. It may be a while before I can put out a vore story of this caliber again, so who knows when it'll be continued, but rest assured that I won't give up on these characters.
Soft vore, male/male, Charizard/Lucario, death and fully detailed digestion (hell yeah!).
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Posted by Enthis_Foxx 17 years ago Report
Awr, I loved your story Shrike! ^^ It was just awesome. Like you said your self, just the contrast of all the emotions. It was just too good. I loved the digestion scene. It still sticks out in my head very well. Excellent job! ^^
Posted by komaru 17 years ago Report
awesome story^_^
Posted by Halcyon 17 years ago Report
I smell a SEQUEL :D
Posted by ShrikeAlvaron 17 years ago Report
A sequel to a sequel?! What do you want, a series?! :D
...I wrote this with another sequel in mind, but not necessarily a series like my real fanfic is. I'm thus calling this the "Rivalry Continuity"
I wanted to put this and Zelos' Cruelty in their own folder, but I couldn't find a way to move Zelos' Cruelty...
Posted by htfcuddles 17 years ago Report
OK. Finally I've read it. I must comment.
After reading this, my soul is fine again. Airs of revenge, yeah!
Since the beginning I hated Zelos because you has created very well to the typical bully: Aggresive, without care or worry about anything but its own pride.
I liked this, because since I've read the first story, I needed to see the revenge.
About the history, I loved it all. How you described digesion. It was so good that when I finished it my question was "Hey! And the scat?" (XD)
5/5 stars. Awesome job. Well done!
Posted by taigon 16 years ago Report
and thats why i taught my lucario extreme speed :p
Posted by Mewtwo 16 years ago Report
I faved this, but never commented. I need to rectify this.
Thank you for authoring such a work of beauty!
Posted by hunter1243 16 years ago Report
i say the bastered had it coming and i only have 2 more words to say. CARMA BITCH
Posted by Anubis582 15 years ago Report
You seem to have forgotten that 1: Steel-types are immune to acids and 2: the Lucario would have blasted his way out using his aura.
Posted by ShrikeAlvaron 15 years ago Report
And you seem to have forgotten that vore period, unless involving snakes or other similar fictional predators, is unrealistic. Besides, if we're talking reality, acids do corrode steel. If we're talking Pokemon canon, Charizards don't normally eat Lucarios. ;)
Posted by Anubis582 15 years ago Report
Even so, did you have to kill the Lucario?
Posted by Anubis582 15 years ago Report
I mean, it would have made more sense to eat the Slaking from the previous story.
Posted by ShrikeAlvaron 15 years ago Report
Come on, chill some. It's just a story. I have nothing against Lucario and, in fact, it's one of my favorites from the fourth gen. I don't mind my favorites dying and I actually tend to like it more if the prey is one of my favorite Pokemon. If you don't want to see Lucario as prey, why did you read the story when I gave in the summary what the pred and prey are?
And if you expected to see Charizard just hold the Lucario in his belly for a few days, you're looking at the wrong author here. :D I've only written a story with that kind of ending once in all the years I've been writing, including stories I haven't posted here. Everything else I write has, at minimal, implied digestion. If it makes you feel better, perhaps they reform or something?
As for the Slaking, Shrike didn't really get the chance. Zelos only presented the Lucario, and Shrike wasn't just going to ask Zelos if he could use the Slaking instead when all he cared about was simply killing one of Zelos' Pokemon, no matter what it was.
Posted by Drake_451 15 years ago Report
Nice!