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One Ate by Moonlight By BerserkerB -- Report

Uploaded: 17 years ago

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A young fox vore finds her latest victim to be harder to catch than she thinks. But could things turn out differently than she expected? F/M and M/F, furry, masterbation.

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Scratch

Posted by Scratch 17 years ago Report

I actually felt sorry for the vixen at the end for some reason, even if she had it coming. Stories don't usually pull at me like that. Nice work.

Deleteduser_120

Posted by Deleteduser_120 16 years ago Report

Revenge mementos are always good in Vore. This story's very detailed and descriptive, and it is structured very well. You've perfectly conveyed the emotions displayed by each character and at the same time also wrapped it so that what is contained in the text can easily be envisioned. Most satisfying was the way in which the vixen met her deserved demise. Excellent work.