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As mentioned in the album description, this story, Deep Forest, was originally posted on a Japanese vore site. The automatic machine translation of the story (note that; I do not understand Japanese) intrigued me since it related to some pictures that I like, and so I decided to rewrite the story in my own fashion. Again, as mentioned in the album description, the base plot is the same as the original however all the detail and character interactions (including dialogue) are based on my own thoughts of the scenario. Credit to the original author and source link is included in the file, to help avoid trouble on my part.
As I said, the base plot of the story and its progression is pretty much the only thing retained from the original as it's all I can really understand with any clarity, while much of the detail and all of the description is my own. Therefore, please don't praise me for the plot and concept but rather for the writing and execution as I don't deserve credit for the plot. ;)
Soft vore, female/male, Milotic/Quilava, death without detailed digestion.
Additional Notes: The prey is pretty young and is referred to as a child, so I guess some may call it underage vore. I don't, but suit yourself.
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Posted by Halcyon 16 years ago Report
Gasp!
Love it! I can't wait for part 2!
You never cease to amaze me :D
Posted by ShrikeAlvaron 16 years ago Report
Heh, thank you. Part 2 should be ready in a day or so as I’ve begun writing it after reading through the original as best I can. Some parts of it, especially the beginning, are very confusing and so I pretty much will have to rewrite all those parts completely and just make up what happens. The vore scenes are very cool though and I see plenty of opportunity to instill the sadness and emotions in it that I believe are one of the hallmarks of my stories, and which I have tortured a non-vorarephile friend of mine with. Said friend happens to love Typhlosion and its pre-evolutions to the point that a story with them getting eaten is apparently giving him nightmares. <_<
Posted by DarkGriffin 16 years ago Report
Wow! Nice work with the translation.
It's nice to finally be able to read the story on that site, even if in heavily edited, probably slightly plot changing format. This is awsome!
Posted by Randomness 16 years ago Report
I want you to know... this is perhaps one of my favorite stories I've read on this site. The fear, struggle, and eventual sadness of the prey, with the (seemingly) calm and calculating predator... makes for a very good read. Adding Pokemon just sweetens the deal! Can't wait to see more out of ya.