Good lord, am I sorry for that wait. This part got the better of me in every way: it's longer, more in-depth, more detailed, more action (which I'm really not used to writing in a vore story), and most importantly is that there is a shitload more dialogue. Now, here's the thing about auto-translating dialogue: it sucks. Because of how casual most dialogue is written and how filled with slang it is, the translators just turn out a bunch of incomprehensible junk. This led to me needing to completely rewrite almost all the dialogue, and the plot while I was at it since it's so much more dependent on dialogue in this part.

After I finally did finish it, I was so worn out and sick of it that it then took me a few months to recuperate and drag my sorry behind over to proof edit it. ...It is so worth it though. Again I can't take complete credit for the plot (although I did end up having to make up a lot of it) but dare god, it's good. Think the first part was emotional? Just wait till you read this one. This has also got to be a record in that it's the first story I have on here that has two vore scenes for the price of one. :D

This part is more graphic than the first, though. The aftereffects of digestion are shown even if it isn't directly shown itself. I pretty much couldn't avoid it though considering how little time passes between the last part and this one, and within this part as well.

Soft vore, female/males, Milotic/Quilava and Typhlosion, deaths due to asphyxiation but the remains of previous meals are shown leading to some situations that most people will probably consider gross. Oh, a bit of blood is shown and the preys are constricted too.

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