#1: Annabel's Story
By 11millionseconds -- Report
This is my very first story you guys! It's an F/M lamia consensual story (some of you called it a Love Pred/Prey story). It's got a little bit of digestion content. I tried to drive the margin between cute and sensual. Any comments are appreciated.
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Posted by Entity 17 years ago Report
I thought it was good, the connection between pred and prey was very well written as was the scene where Daniel was eaten, nice work. Hope you write some more
Posted by Sarus 17 years ago Report
Heh, very nice story!
I like the way you make Annabel seems all cute and innocent yet still digests him at the end :)
I'll be looking forward for more.
Posted by nikki 15 years ago Report
M.O.R.E!!!аnd a little more sex :-)
Posted by 11millionseconds 15 years ago Report
Thanks haha... I've been meaning to do some more writing I've just been a bit busy. I'll be sure to add more intimate moments in future works =)
Posted by TT 15 years ago Report
does he still have his clothes on when he is swallowed?
Posted by 11millionseconds 15 years ago Report
Yep he did, but it was the clothes he was sleeping in, so mostly undershirt/stuff like that.
Posted by TT 15 years ago Report
as a suggestion if you ever write another lamia story may be leave the pants on but the rest of the body naked because it is very hot and humid inside the the lamia's body
Posted by mrcool 8 years ago Report
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