Posted by French_snack 16 years ago Report

Well, I said it on the forum, but I'll say it again here: This story is fantastic! Very well written (the descriptions, the details, the interaction between characters,... the vore), and full of good ideas.

I feel honoured that you developed my character in such a story.

Truly impressive. You're a very good writer!

Posted by bedfordsb 16 years ago Report

Thanks again FS - you'll notice I didn't try describing what it would be like to journey right through Cherry - thought I'd leave that entirely for you !

Posted by French_snack 16 years ago Report

Hehe... Well, from the prey's perspective, it's impossible to experience the full journey while remaining conscious. By the time they enter her intestine, they're already liquified. One thing I can do, of course, is write about what Cherry is doing while her food is progressing on its journey. ;)

Posted by bedfordsb 16 years ago Report

Excellent idea - I have been thinking about doing that too. Of course if it was possible to do a full tour of Cherry wihout being digested, that would change everything - but I suspect she's a gulp and forget girl who wouldn;t want all the hassle of live people in her guts

Posted by French_snack 16 years ago Report

Definitely. She would find that a little disturbing. When she swallows people, she intends to digest them. She would be uncomfortable with the idea of them moving around alive in her guts... and *very* uncomfortable with the idea of them coming out alive the other end, which would give them a view of her bare bottom and private parts. There are some things a girl like Cherry doesn't want to be showing off to everyone. ;)

I'm sure lots of prey would love to go on a full tour of Cherry and come out alive, but that's not her idea of eating people as food. She is indeed, basically, a "gulp and forget girl".

Posted by atak 16 years ago Report

Murrrr, very VERY wonderful story indeed. Nicolas was quite a lucky little snack. Getting to know his predator a while, to get to know the one he was going to give his life for.
I bet it was just wonderful for him inside her stomach. I really loved getting to read about the trinkets and random remains inside Cherry's merciless stomach, and loved that he got a light sent down with him!

Do wish we could have gotten to find out what it was like to be digested alive by Cherry, but even despite that it was wonderful!

Hee, I bet she gave him a very sweet, fond farewell when she pooped him out her wonderful anus like any other bit of used up food.

Grins, one thing I for one would LOVE to see in a future story, is the prey talking with Cherry about how she's gonna feel about his sacrifice, how much his life means to her as a snack and whatnot. Always fun to be firmly reminded of the lowly position you're about to take for your desired, but greedy, selfish, wonderful predator!

Murr, still VERY very good work. Cherry is by far one of my much more favorite female predators, and I hope to see many more stories of her sending lucky victims to her greedy hungry depths!

Posted by bedfordsb 16 years ago Report

Thanks Atak, it's really helpful to know what people think. Cherry is essentially a nice girl, so she would find it difficult (unless she was RP-ing) to taunt someone - I had to make her angry so she'd not be quite so pleasant to Nicolas. But it's still something that could be thought about for the future.

I'd prefer to leave a possible story about a journey through Cherry to French, her creator - unless he's too busy with his excellent Felarya series

Kind regards

bedfordsb

Posted by atak 16 years ago Report

Murr, she seems to be a 'nice girl' who doesn't think twice about sending people to their deaths inside of her stomach. And she seems to do it purely for her own pleasure and satisfaction, even if she does try to satisfy her prey in the process.

I do wonder how much she enjoys feeling her prey struggling as she digests them alive? And if she ever really thinks about what her prey is going through deep down inside of her?

But as for telling her prey what he's going to go through, I can definitely see at least one private snack of hers being very eager and intent on getting her to talk with him about his upcoming fate. I can see him asking her about it several times, until she finally relents, looks over at him with a mildly annoyed look on her face, and then flatly, firmly tells him exactly what he can expect to happen to him inside of her, how she will feel about it, how quickly she'll move on from eating him up, and how at the end of it all he can only expect to be her poop!

After that, he might have to try and make it up to her, or perhaps by making her tell him those things that she usually tries to avoid; he has made her care about him and his sacrifice even less then she normally does, so while she would still probably try to do whatever else it was he wanted, she would be looking forward to having him in her stomach and being done with him forever ^^.

Murr, but those are just some thoughts I had, and thought would be fun to share. Hee, do hope to see more of your work sometime! ^^ Just love Cherry!