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WITH FRIENDS LIKE THAT
This is the roleplay where Fe'ath tricks JackJackal into getting eaten
by Snakenard on Sep 15,2008.
Players:
* Prey1: JackJackal - Dark brown furred anthro jackal
* Pred1: Snakenard - 12 foot brown python
* other: Fe'ath - 2 foot tall anthro owl
* other: Allorn - Feral green tree boa
* other: AzuraTheFox - brilliant blue anthro fox
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17:44:02 :JackJackal slips in and smiles, Sitting down
17:45:25 :Fe'ath was hoping JackJackal might slip up ...
17:46:05 :JackJackal eyes Fe'ath a little, thinking about making her
slip down something moist and tight
17:47:54 :Fe'ath isn't the one doing any slipping, anywhere!
17:51:59 :JackJackal softly wraps his paws around Fe'ath and snuggles
her up
17:53:03 :Fe'ath wingtickles JackJackal anyway, in a lazy manner.
17:53:31 :JackJackal smiles and leans against Fe'ath a little ^_^
17:57:09 :Fe'ath grunts, the small bird not that capable of supporting
being leaned on too well.
18:07:43 :Fe'ath wingpokes at JackJackal and cheeps "Hey ...! Want to
play fetch again? Go grab a snakes tail!"
18:08:41 :JackJackal grins and nods to Fe, then bounds off to find a
Snakes tail
18:10:12 :Snakenard a 12 foot python enters the Park Commons and
flicks his tongue around a bit to taste the air and "see" whats
around.
18:11:12 :JackJackal bounds over to Snakenard and wags his tail
18:11:56 Snakenard: Hello jackal what's up?
18:12:20 :JackJackal smiles up at Snakenard! "Hi! ^_^ Can I ask of you
something?"
18:13:48 :Snakenard looks up and in a pleasant voice says, "what would
you like?"
18:14:38 :JackJackal glees back at the snake and shuffles a little,
"Can I have your tail?"
18:16:19 :Snakenard says, "sure as long as it remains attached to me.
How about I put my tail up in the air and you can get a hold of it.
Just don't bite too hard."
18:17:51 :JackJackal nodnods and slinks over, placing the snakes tail
over his shoulder and grins back to the snake, "Okies! It's a deal!"
Slowly starts to pull at the snake in the direction back to Fe
18:20:13 :Snakenard just rides along content to be a passenger on
JackJackal's shoulder.
18:21:12 :JackJackal steps on over to Fe'ath and slowly drops him down
at Fe'ath's feet! ^___^ his tail wagging happily, "woof!"
18:25:44 :Fe'ath wasn't exactly expecting JackJackal to come back ...
but it was too late to flee when he returns either. "Errr ... ohh. Hi
...!" she cheeps, uncertainly. "Back so soon?"
18:26:34 :JackJackal nodnods and pushes the snake and his tail closer
to Fe, "One snake tail! ^_^"
18:27:20 Snakenard: "That was such a fun ride", says Snakenard
18:28:10 :Fe'ath jumps back quickly, and yips "H-hey! You didn't kill
it first??!" sounding quite shocked! "Bah!!" She grumbles, having of
course hoped the jackal would end up gobbled up or something. "Well,
just ... uhh ..." She's not sure what to do now she actually HAS a
snake. "Just keep hold of it, still!"
18:30:26 :JackJackal picks up the snake and loops the snakes tail
around Fe'ath's neck and steps back, "Awah, it looks so cute on you
^_^"
18:32:38 :Fe'ath squeals, not at all happy with the 'present' made of
the snakes tail, especially about her neck! It's not a position where
she can bite after all, and lacking claws, can't exactly claw at the
snake either. So she ends up yipping "Get it off!" whilst flapping
with her wings at the serpent. "Take it into the woods or something,
get rid of it!"
18:33:24 :Snakenard puts his tail up in the air.
18:36:37 :JackJackal whines out and nods a little and drags Snakenard
out into the woods, "Sorry... " placing him down and scampering over
to Fe'ath again
18:36:47 Fe'ath: Breathing a sigh of relief, Fe'ath rubs her neck;
very much relieved after the shock.
18:37:39 :JackJackal nuzzles into Fe'ath and murrles
18:38:08 :Snakenard departs into the woods.
18:38:46 :Fe'ath grumbles faintly, her plans just not working out too
well. She rubs at her neck, and patpats the doggy.
18:39:01 :Allorn watches the events and slithers over to the python,
also in the woods, at the moment just watching and flickering her
tongue at him.
18:39:12 :JackJackal licks out at Fe'ath and leans lightly against her
this time
18:40:17 :Fe'ath ducks away from the licking, and smacks JackJackal
right on the nose with a soft wing!
18:40:39 :JackJackal yelps and sits down in front of her 9_9
18:42:39 :Snakenard flicks his tongue in the direction of the green
snake.
18:44:55 :Allorn flicks it back and stops, "Hello" she says politely
to him, offering a smile
18:46:34 :JackJackal scampers over to Sparky and smiles down at him,
"Hey! I need your help ^_^
18:47:07 :Snakenard says to the pretty green snake, "I'm new around
here, do you know of any good prey around here?"
18:51:02 :Allorn shakes her head "Unlesss of courssse you count
already eaten prey.." she points to the bulge at her belly "But
welcome to the park, you ssshouldn't have too much trouble finding
prey, there are hundredsss of different ssspeciess that visssit and
even live here" she comments.
18:54:38 :Snakenard to the green snake, "Well, I have a chance at a
jackal, but I missed my one chance. You know how it is with prey."
18:56:14 :Allorn moves closer to him and stops, resting herself "Ah,
what sssort of prey do you mean? I know how it isss with prey that are
sssimply too fasst to catch.. and I alssso know how it isss with prey
that are too cute to eat" she says to him.
18:56:40 :JackJackal sits down on the grass and scopes of any snakes
that could make Fe'ath happy
18:57:08 :AzuraTheFox decides to help JackJackal.
18:57:11 :Fe'ath thinks she'd only be happy when the jackal is a bulge
in something!
18:58:48 :JackJackal smiles up at Azura and wags his tail, nuzzling
into him a little
18:59:40 :AzuraTheFox hugs JackJackal and nuzzles back.
18:59:43 :Snakenard says to the green snake, "I'm more of an ambush
predator. I like to wait until the prey gets close then strike. I've
noticed that some preds around here use trickery to get there prey.
I'm not that good at trickery. I'm more of a direct snake.".
19:01:29 :JackJackal nuzzles Azura and smiles, "I'm looking for a
snake ^_^"
19:01:54 AzuraTheFox: "I'll help you," said Azura.
19:03:22 :JackJackal looks out into the fox and sighs, 'You know any
snakes around here?"
19:04:01 :Allorn nods to him "Yeah I sssee. You could sssay I ussse
trickery. But then, after they've spoken with me.. allot of my prey
become willing" she giggles "But you'll catch something, I believe
theres allot of predators like you. They seem to get along fine to me"
19:05:48 :AzuraTheFox points to Allorn and Snakenard. "How about
them?"
19:06:41 :Snakenard says, "You must be a golden orator to charm your
prey into submission", Snakenard says to the green snake. He then
adds, "Oh look, there is that jackal again, and it is headed our
way.".
19:10:26 :Allorn giggles "Perhapsss, but I don't big myssself up over
it" she nods, and looks around "Oh, where?" she wasn't hungry, but
perhaps she could help him.
19:10:30 :JackJackal lays in the grass and watches Snakenard talking
to someone he didn't quite see
19:12:29 :Snakenard gets closer to the green snake and whispers to
her, "I wonder if the jackal is foolish to try the same trick again.".
19:14:11 :Fe'ath stretches her wings and lazily yawns, before looking
around in the hopes something looks enticing enough for a spot of
mischief.
19:14:36 :Allorn headtilts "Just what exactly did the jackal do
anyway?" she whispers back to him "I will help you perhaps?" she said
and watches the Jackal, hidden.
19:15:16 :JackJackal wags his tail a little and looks around for more
snakes he could ask.
19:16:35 :Snakenard says quietly to the green snake, "I'm not sure the
seem to have an infatuation with owls. The even take orders from them,
even when it puts the jackal in danger.".
19:19:24 :Allorn seems confused, or rather just amused, "Haven't heard
that one before.." she hmms, trying to think of any particular owl
that might have done it "Beats me" she shrugs.
19:19:53 :JackJackal rolls over onto his back and sighs out, his legs
sprawled out
19:21:07 :Snakenard says quietly to the green snake, "What is that
crazy jackal doing now?"
19:24:21 :Allorn shakes her head "Don't know, perhapsss I ssshould go
over there.." she thinks about it, and looks to the other snake, as if
to see if he has input.
19:25:26 :JackJackal sticks his touch out to try taste the air like
snakes do, but only gets a little drool on his own nose.
19:26:57 :Snakenard says "yesss, let us go closer and find out just
what the jackal is up to", he then follows the green snake towards the
jackal.
19:27:08 :Fe'ath balances an acorn on JackJackal's nose.
19:27:42 :JackJackal smiles up at Fe'ath and wags his tail
delightfully, not knowing of the two snakes path towards him
19:27:51 :Allorn slithers over to the jackal, and flicks her tongue,
tasting the air like he tried to do. She waits to see how he will
react.
19:28:28 :JackJackal blinks up at Allorn and smiles happily, sitting
up quickly, "Oh hi!"
19:29:56 :Snakenard followed the green snake close behind. Then flicks
his tongue into the air to taste the presents of an owl, a jackal and
another snake.
19:30:43 :Allorn waves with her tailtip "Hello" she says to the
jackal, "My my, you're a cute one aren't you?"
19:32:58 :JackJackal blushes a little and smiles to Allorn and then to
Snakenard, "hehe, aww, thanks... so you've come to give me snakes
tail?"
19:33:27 :Snakenard just "stands" by quietly listening to the
conversation between the green stake and the jackal.
19:33:42 :Fe'ath can't help but snigger at exactly how JackJackal
asked that. Seems like the jackal wanting a bit of snake tail ...
19:34:55 :Allorn headtilts "Hmm.." she circles around him, sniffs him
a few times, licks him a few times then stops. "Ssso why exactly do
you want a ssnake tail?"
19:36:43 :JackJackal gets up and points to Fe'ath a little, "She wants
Snakes tail ^-^" licking back at the snake that was circling him
19:38:34 :Allorn now looks to the owl the jackal pointed at, hissing a
tad bit, but not unpleasantly.. "I sssee" she says, and slithers over
to the owl.
19:39:53 :Fe'ath blinkblinks, and cheeps "Hey now, don't drag me into
this! It was merely a suggestion ..." she stops, pausing a little and
shuffles back, eyeing Allorn skeptically. "I just wanted to see
something amusing like the jackal being all gobbled up actually."
19:40:26 :Snakenard says to the jackal, "Do you think your owl friend
would prefer a brown tail like mine or a green tail?"
19:41:55 :Allorn blinked, and looked back to the fairly happy jackal,
then listens to the other snakes comment. "Ssseemsss a little harsssh
to me, why isss it amussing?" she asks curiously, not approaching Fe
any further, just watching her with a flickering tongue.
19:42:04 :JackJackal smiles out and smiles to Fe, "I got you Two
snakes tails! ^_^"
19:43:12 :Fe'ath fluffs her feathers up, looking somewhat more rotund.
She then explains, "Well, it just is! Don't you think it's funny to
see someone get gobbled up? I mean ... snakes do it all the time,
right? It's not that harsh, just a lesson of life and predator and
prey and all that."
19:43:59 :Snakenard says to the jackal, "I think she would prefer you
pick up the tail and hand it to her"
19:46:07 :Allorn gives a stern look to the owl, and then replies "Oh
you mean, sssomeone thatsss begging to be sssaved and wiggling and
sssquirming? Sssorry, not my idea of fun, I'd put up with it if I
wasss hungry, but it'sss rare I eat anything that doesssn't want to go
down.." she comments, but she's not bothered too much. Fe'ath was
entitled to her opinion after all.
19:46:08 :JackJackal smiles to Snakenard and wags his tail,
19:46:34 :Snakenard raises his tail.
19:46:49 JackJackal: which one.. Green or Yours?
19:47:57 Snakenard: I have the brown one
19:48:54 :JackJackal yawns a little and smiles to Allorn and Snakenard
for coming with him to Fe.
19:50:11 :Snakenard waves his tail in a slow and tempting way towards
the jackal
19:50:50 :JackJackal slowly takes it in his paws and legs it hang over
his shoulders
19:52:00 :Snakenard puts one loose coil of himself (the part nearest
his tail) around the jackal then says, "Oops, Sorry, I felt myself
slip and I did not want to fall."
19:53:24 :JackJackal smiles and looks back at the Snack and strokes at
his coils a little, "Aww thats ok! ^_^" the jackal wagging his tail
like an over excited dog
19:54:58 :Allorn watches the progress of the snake and jackal..
knowing it was probably an act on the snakes part to get a meal. She
looks to the owl "Looks like you'll get to sssee what you wanted to
sssee anyway"
19:56:25 :Snakenard then says, "I think your owl friend would like you
to take me a great distance, I better put a second coil of myself
around so I will not fall off". Snakenard then puts a second coil
about the jackal waist.
19:56:36 :Fe'ath watches on herself, after having nodded at Allorn.
She rubs the side of her beak and cheeps "Well, yeah, each to their
own, as they say. I just find it amusing how people beg, myself. Along
those lines anyway."
19:58:53 :JackJackal smiles and wriggles a little as the second loop
goes around his waist and smiles a little "It feels quite snuggly with
your coils around me likes this.." the jackal states, his paws
stroking a little with a nod, "I guess you'd better put another around
for safe-keeping."
19:59:44 :AzuraTheFox approaches JackJackal and Snakenard. "Um, are
you sure that doesn't feel a little tight?" he asked.
19:59:47 :Allorn nods back to her "Fair enough, I don't mind watching
thisss now, sssince that snake needsss a meal anyway.." she observes
the jackal and the brown python, near Fe.
20:01:30 Snakenard: says, "oh, yessss I should try a third coil."
Snakenard, then obliges and wraps himself around again. "There", he
says, "now we can do anything your owl friend wishes."
20:01:51 :Fe'ath smacks Leshana absently, whilst watching a jackal get
gobbled up, beak parted in an avianish grin.
20:03:46 :JackJackal looks over his shoulder to Fe, grinning to her,
""Like this?" he states out a little, his paws holding up some of the
coils
20:04:50 :Snakenard says to the owl, "Where do you wish your jackal
friend to go?"
20:05:22 :AzuraTheFox watched, hoping that his friend wasn't going to
get hurt.
20:08:51 :Fe'ath laughs softly at the snake and jackal and cheeps "Go?
Well, inside of course! down the tube!"
20:10:22 :JackJackal blinks a little at the Owl, "Tube?" his tail
wagging a little, his eyes going back to the snake
20:11:07 :AzuraTheFox puts a hand to his forehead. "He-- Oh, never
mind...
20:11:54 :Fe'ath nodnods and echoes, "Tube! Down the throat, down the
hatch, down the ... snake! The opposite of up a ladder!"
20:12:49 :JackJackal blinks a little worried now, "Down the snake?"
shivers a little, 'But that means...."
20:13:18 :Fe'ath cackles and of course follows her cackle with an
enthusiastic nodnodding! She's a sadistic little child.
20:13:35 :Snakenard says, "yes, it means that I will get a good
meal.". Snakenard then says, "You heard what she said. And come to
think of it I am a bit peckish". Snakenard then holds just a little
tighter. Not enough to effect the jackal breathing, just enough to
make sure the jackal will not escape.
20:15:45 :JackJackal yips out a little, "A good meal?" squirming a
little now finding the coils a little tighter, 'But but Fe... You
wanted me to bring you a snakes tail! Not this?"
20:17:40 :Fe'ath giggles a little more. "Well, it was more the
fetching part I was interested in, not actually bringing it to me.
Usually it should be enough to see the fetching person end up as
dinner!"
20:19:11 :JackJackal whines out a little, 'But I'm not dinner!"
squirming a little more.
20:19:24 :Snakenard presses just a bit harder, he can feal each breath
that the jackal takes. Snakenard starts to pay attention to the heart
beats of the jackal. After all he wants to be able feel when life
passes out of the jackal.
20:20:02 :Fe'ath polishes her fingers against her chesttfeathers,
smugly, then waves byebye to the jackal. "Bye bye doggy, goodbye ..."
20:21:58 :JackJackal yelps out and paws out to her, "wait no..."
coughing a little bit and whining back to the snake, "Don't leave
me... I'm your favorite doggy!" shivering a little at the sight of the
snake, trying to uncoil himself.
20:23:01 :Snakenard says, "You know what they say, with friends like
that who needs enemies.". Snakenard then enjoys the squirming that the
jackal makes in his coils.
20:25:53 :JackJackal shudders and yips out a little, 'Butbut... you'll
be my friend right?" the jackal squirming in his coils, his paws
trying to push them away from himself.
20:26:24 :Snakenard starts to think of the wonderful budge the the
jackal will make in his belly. Snakenard then says to the owl, "Do you
you want to see me swallow him alive or should I crush him all the way
first?"
20:27:22 :Fe'ath laughs out loud "Ohh, no, don't kill him! Not just
yet, not until he's in your belly anyway ... Of course feel free to
weaken him if you want, whatever works for you though ... wouldn't
want you to be hurt after all if you tried gobbling him up whilst he
was still kicking hard ..."
20:28:32 :JackJackal whines out and pleads to the snake, "Or you could
just let me go, I won't hurt you or anything! I promise!" the jackal
wheezing out a little from the constriction of the coils
20:31:38 :Snakenard says to the jackal, "You can be a friend, A friend
to my tummy.". Snakenard says to the owl, "You know if you look at his
legs he'll do a little dance just before he passes out". Snakenard
squeezes just a little tighter. The jackal can still breath with some
effort.
20:33:48 :JackJackal yips and tries to break himself free from the
snake, his muscles straining against the snake, "Nooo let me Go! Fe
tell him to let me go!" whining out a little more than usual!
20:34:35 :Snakenard says,"Do you want him to go inside?"
20:35:44 :Fe'ath giggles a fair bit longer, quite amused by how the
snake was dealing with the jackal. "Hehe, that's funny!" she cheeps,
then nodnods at the snake, "Sure, put him on down!" To the jackal she
again waves jauntily, "Enjoy your trip!"
20:38:11 :JackJackal Yelps out and shakes, "Down onto the grass! Down
onto the grass!" it's safer there! It'd be good for both of us!"
worming around in the coils still, his tail batting softly against the
snake in a feeable attempt to combat the snake!
20:39:10 :Snakenard starts to picture the jackal's heart beating in
his mind. This will be tricky for Snakenard. He will have to constrict
the jackal just long enough to make him passout but not too long to
stop his heart. Snakenard starts to put the pressure on the jackal is
barely able to breath. Snakenard's mouth begins to water.
20:41:12 :JackJackal yelps out as his breath starts to lack in taking
oxygen in, every time he breathed out his body was squeezed in a
little more, meaning less air for him, his vision going fuzzy, his
head going light, "wait..Ngg snake... wait.... don't" mellowly
stuttering out.
20:42:39 :Fe'ath simply watches, not getting involved at the present
and merely reclines like one watching a good movie, all relaxed.
20:43:42 :Snakenard puts the pressure on. He can no longer feel the
jackal's breathing. He can feel the jackal's struggles and he can feel
his victims heart racing.
20:44:48 :JackJackal flopped down onto the scales headfirst, lights
out, his poor paws sprawled out, looking like he was sleeping
peacefully
20:48:38 :Fe'ath sniggers softly, stretching her arms out above her
head and wiggling her toes. "Well, that's that bit done ..." she hoots
to Snakenard. "Enjoy your meal!"
20:48:45 :Snakenard feels the jackal passout, he can still feal the
faint heart beat of the jackal. he loosens his coils just enough to
allow a single breath, he doesn't want the jackal to die too soon. He
then says to the owl, "heads or tails" this is his jovial way to ask
if the victim should go down head first(heads) or legs first(tails)
20:50:19 :JackJackal he was unable to anything now, his body flopping
to one side of the coils, his head falling to one side
20:51:45 :Fe'ath chuckles and waggles a wing, cheeping "Up to you,
it's your meal, I'm just watching and laughing, is all."
20:53:32 :Snakenard grasps the feet of the jackal and and starts to
pull him in he keeps swallowing untell he reaches the about half the
belly then waits for the jackal to wake up.
20:56:10 :JackJackal took a while to come through, "Ohhh my head...
Ngg what the hell happened? the jackal looking around, "Ahh.. I'm
fine...."then looking down at the snake, "EEP! What are you doing! Let
go of me!"
20:59:50 :Snakenard then mumbles, "I thought the owl would like to get
one last look at you before you start your final journey. Snakenard
then pulls in his prey so just the arms and head is poking out. The
rest is just a bulge in Snakenard through.
21:01:27 :JackJackal squirms out and wriggles from side to side,
"Nooo, Fe... please! Help me!" his paws waving out to her, his head
shaking from side to side as that was the only thing he was able to do
at the moment!
21:05:44 :Fe'ath gets up and wanders on over to offer a wingfeather to
the jackal ... only to snatch it away when Jack reaches for it. She
giggles, and fluffs up with a soft chortle.
21:05:06 :Snakenard's saliva is now soaking into the jackal's fur, as
Snakenard enjoys the jackal's struggle. Snakenard opens his maw wide
to capture the jackal's waving arms. His powerful throat muscles pull
the jackal in as only the head is visible in the snakes gaping jaws.
21:08:41 :JackJackal with only his head left inside the snakes jaws
able to whimper a pleading please to the Owl who had tricked him, his
body causing the large bulge in the snake to shift and move from side
to side, "I don't want to be snake food!" his ears being pushed over
his face a little.
21:09:49 :Fe'ath lazily yawns, and stretches; her job done she looks
around for something else to entertain her.
21:11:29 :Snakenard says, "To late". Then he swallows the head. He can
feal the squirming of the jackal as it becomes just a bulge behind the
snakes head.
21:13:38 :JackJackal yips out and whines out, squirming heavily, "It's
not to Late It's Not to La...." the jackal cut short by the snakes
large maw closing around his head, the bulge squirming from side to
side inside, his poor paws pushing out against the fleshy walls of the
snake, little moans could be heard from the inside!
21:17:24 :Snakenard begins to push the jackal towards his stomach. He
stretches his jaws back into place. He can still feal squirming as the
meal is pushed down. He begin to wonder just how long the squirming
will last, and when He will feal a reviving rush of nourishment from
the body he has just consumed.
21:21:51 :JackJackal wasn't going to give up any time soon, his paws
still weakly pushing out against the snakes innards, finding himself
dragged down further, wondering where he was being taken, his whines
louder as in hims mind he knew there was only one place. his body
twisting and turning to try anything to stop the progress!
21:25:43 Snakenard: The squirming from deep inside feels so pleasing.
A little more pushing and the jackal is in the snakes stomach, a
stomach that is greedy for meat. Any meat will do and jackal meat
would provide fine nourishment for Snakenard's still growing body
21:28:19 :JackJackal whines out from inside the stomach, his body
going weak, unable to keep up the constant pushing and struggling, his
body being slotted into the tummy of the snake, his nose picking up on
the sell of snake acids!
21:32:42 :Fe'ath sings quietly to herself, wandering back on over to
her usual swing and settles down on it.
21:33:34 :Snakenard knows that the jackal will not be able to keep up
the fight much longer there is little oxygen in the snakes stomach.
Just to speed things along a drowning pool of acid is pumped into the
stomach. Snakenard yawns as he returns to his burrow. he can feel the
squirming start to die down.
21:35:50 :JackJackal dies down after the squealing and crying out of
the jackal inside as the acids were dumped into the stomach and
swirling around him, his body fighting against it, trying to worm
himself out in any direction, only causing him to push himself further
into the stomach itself, getting washed and digested suddenly!
"AAhhh!"
21:40:26 :Snakenard's stomach is hungry for meat, it's mussels start
pulling and twisting at the jackal's body which is beginning to weaken
from lack of oxygen. Snakenard curls up in his burrow as his stomach
starts to do the work of digesting such a big meal.
21:47:30 :Snakenard delights as the Jackal's body does it's final
death convulsions. Snakenard feels the rush of nourishment provided by
the jackal's body. Snakenard then remembers to thank the owl for
helping provide him with such a nourishment meal. Snakenard then goes
to sleep in his burrow, tired from the struggle
21:56:27 :Fe'ath looks unrepentant .. and amused, of course.
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This is a cleaned up version of the role play. To see it in it's
original form view "Park Commons" on 2008-09-15 from 17:44 to 21:57
with the following characters. Fe (known as Fe'ath), JackJackal,
Snakenard, FoxGuy (Now known as AzuraTheFox), Allorn.
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