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This is a story about Jack that realizes that his sexy girlfriend is going to break up with him. Yet he is invited to the last dinner, or should I say, he is invited to be the last dinner...
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Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report
Sexy. :p I like their perspectives, and the fact that he agrees simply by following her; he doesn't actually say "yes" (at first). Such is her hold over him - which, strangely enough, does come across as credible. Odri is casual yet, to a certain extent, caring; extremely selfish, yet not entirely unconcerned about him. Her behaviour is... interesting, to say the least. The domineering / dominated aspect is well played out. Speaking as prey myself, I find I can relate to what you describe Jack as feeling.
A small point of grammar: Remember to capitalise words at the start of a sentence.
Posted by huitcinquante 14 years ago Report
Sexy, yes, and romantic... In a kind of way which interest me. I've always thought about this situation: a bored girlfriend who friendly propose an alternate solution at her decision to leave... In the way you describe things, i don't even wonder if i could resisted with some of them i can remember...
Posted by DT5459 14 years ago Report
Thanks for the comments!
yea, it would be hard to resist
Posted by JShadow1998 1 year ago Report
Man it was hard finding this story again.
Ahhh i remember reading this a couple years ago.
Still hot~