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Two college drug dealers have a business proposition for the mysterious Mr Koontz. Why does the old mobster insist they be naked for the meeting and who or what are the girls he brings with him? Features some vaginal vore of a sort.
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Posted by MrQuarantine 13 years ago Report
Absolutely magnificent if I had a hat I'd tip it 2 u that was a 5 star story u just wrote with likable characters with a little mystery thrown in luved the bj and at the end where she said I can find u anywhere my mind is blown by ur skill the only thing that could possibly make it any better is a sequel ........PLEASE make a follow up this is fabulous it must be done I'm curious about what the backstory for the demons and koontz are and I need 2know what happens 2 Donald if like he becomes their leader or somethin please do what u do best and write
Posted by ManyEyedHydra 13 years ago Report
Koontz is one of my regular characters. He'll crop up again. I have an idea how to follow up Donald's story as well, although I don't know when I'll get to writing it up.
Posted by f4k3n4m3is1234 13 years ago Report
i know this story was posted 2 years ago, but i have to know, what IS Diona? She doesn't match up with your traditional Succubus.
Posted by ManyEyedHydra 13 years ago Report
A succubus variant. I like to vary from the standard succubus template every so often (sometimes way from the standard template if its a hell-space story). Some of them have different specialties and talents.
Posted by f4k3n4m3is1234 13 years ago Report
Like the Milk maid one, and breast crush (on erotica)?