Posted by Imrhys 15 years ago Report

*bows appreciatively* Now that is an excellent way to finish. And you left it open for some other spin offs too.

I had had concerns over the size you kept mentioning, but this works out well. Well worth the wait.

I wish I had been able to find some flaws to "expose" but... you did exceptionally.

Posted by jmy170 15 years ago Report

After lurking here for a few months, I've gotta say, that was an epic series. I loved every part. I'm really hoping that this isn't the last we see of Janice and Ian, now I'm not talking about continuing 'Outfoxed' but it would be nice to read about them in the future.

Posted by Poojawa 15 years ago Report

Hoorah! A good, lovely ending <3

Thank you so very much for this story!

Posted by Epicurus 15 years ago Report

I've been lurking here for almost a year, too afraid to actually take the step of creating an account to say something, but the occasion of finishing this series made me speak up.

Thanks for writing this and sharing it. I love the way you write in general, and I love that the vore/neko campus is well enough thought out to hang together as a world. I hope you'll do more with it. And I particularly love that you've shown Janice growing up from a character that was entertaining to watch in a guilty way into someone I actually really like. I wish Janice and Ian all possible happiness, and I hope that we might hear something more about them in the future. The life of the goddess of kitsune shouldn't actually be too dull to write about, even if she's fortunate enough not to have bad things happen to her.

Posted by Fairlyn 15 years ago Report

nice end to a nice story.

Posted by Resileaf 15 years ago Report

I have to admit, I used to both love and loathe this story... I simply couldn't enjoy the fact that she would eat people and 'kill' them in some sort... They didn't die, but they didn't live anymore afterwards either.
But this ending makes the whole thing a lot different! With Janice's redemption, the whole thing feels a whole lot enjoyable now. Excellent way of ending a story to make it happy!

Now, are you planning a season 2 already? Or would you prefer to stop that storyline and concentrate on other things?

Posted by iliapoerion 15 years ago Report

Wow... It is over...
What a great series.....
I agree with everyone else, it was nice to see Janice finally realize why she needs to be responsible, that others have meaning, and such. It couldn't have had this meaning if it happened back in #5, or even in #17 or so. Only after Ian and his family got nommed did her change mean something.
The only flaw I can find in this was an omission of a name

"for instance (as did Ryouko, who'd grown quite fond of her),".

?? Who is her?

Besides that one tiny mistake, it was absolutely perfect. Thanks for writing this series. It was a pleasure to read, I always looked for your stories before anything else (I wnt on a computer-less vacation recently, and must have missed this somehow...), and I look forward to anything else you may write in the future, in your vore-campus world.

Thank you for a wonderful story.

Posted by Throat_Wolf 15 years ago Report

"her" being Jenna, who was mentioned earlier in the same sentence as the owner of the realm where a lot of the orphan kitsune went?

I'll take another look at that sentence, maybe I should tweak it for clarity and re-upload.

Posted by iliapoerion 15 years ago Report

Oh... That makes sense.

Posted by Entirely_Logical 15 years ago Report

I won't say that i didn't enjoy reading these, because I honestly did. However, the entire time, it felt like something was missing, and I couldn't figure out what it was until recently; a nemesis. Your stories only occasionally see a true enemy, and even then, you either deal with or turn that enemy into an ally - take Nancy, for example, or Dick.

What it needs is someone - or in the case of a story of this nature, a group - who we can rely on to cause trouble/harm to the protagonists.

I do have an idea for exactly who that organization could be. Let me know if you're interested in hearing it.

Posted by Throat_Wolf 15 years ago Report

Thanks for your feedback. I do respect your opinion, and I'll grant that it might be interesting to come up with some kind of "enemy" organization to threaten the vores. In fact, I've even scratched around at starting one in the "LisAdventures" story arc (which I probably should get around to continuing one of these days). I think it's in RP & Other.

But on the whole the kind of stories I usually want to tell really don't need such an organization. By and large it would be a distraction. I mean, you don't pick up most Harlequin Romance novels to find that the hero and heroine's romance is threatened by some shadowy secret organization.

Posted by Entirely_Logical 15 years ago Report

On that note, I've been thinking on a new story that would place your characters squarely in the "antagonist" category at first, starting off very black and white, blurring the lines, and exploring several shades of grey between as time goes on.

How I think of it is that some people on the campus aren't so accepting of the changes to their world. They don't like that people are taken off the street, never to be seen again, while the police do jack squat about it. For the sake of what they consider to be human preservation (while they may not be truly dying, they're disappearing from the world nonetheless), take the law into their own hands to try to take out the perceived threat, while at the same time, doing all they can to stay alive, and stay themselves.
Of course, over time they realize that the 'threat' they're hunting is only trying to do the same, and eventually they'd come to some kind of understanding, but until that point, I can foresee a lot of potentially violent situations.

... Now that I have a basic outline, I just need a plot... And characters... And don't forget details... I think I'd better get to work. =P

Posted by Throat_Wolf 15 years ago Report

That sounds like an interesting idea for a story. I'll certainly be interested to see what you come up with.

(To note, I've played around a little with that idea, too. The pred in "One Good Turn" got shot by a would-be meal, recall.)

Posted by gn10010 12 years ago Report

Well, that was bloody amazing, despite the slight burning in my eyes from reading the 20 in a row, it was exceptional.

Posted by Adseria 10 years ago Report

So, having just read this series from start to finish, I just wanted to- wait, why are my eyes wet?

Great story...

Posted by Ome 10 years ago Report

Glad it all ended happy. A really good series. :3