Very true. There really should be some kind of educational film to ensure everyone is informed. Oh...I suppose I'm guilty of it myself. :)
Thank you; glad you enjoyed it. With this being the first story in my gallery, I was a bit nervous so it's nice to know that someone enjoyed it. Thanks!
Very nicely done. There's a good level of description in this story, and you've certainly conveyed a very tense atmosphere. The interaction between Izzy and Ara before she suddenly turns on him is a very nice touch, and you've certainly described his inner emotions well. Found a few grammatical errors, but nothing that can't be fixed. This work kind of makes me wish I could do this with my catboy character...again. Yeah - you've produced something very good as a short story.
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Posted by Zavior 16 years ago Report
I enjoyed it :)
I like how she tricked him. Never trust a cat ;)
Posted by Izzy_Koji 16 years ago Report
Thank you; I'm very glad to hear you found it to your liking!
Never trust a cat. Yes, very wise words indeed. :)
Thanks again for the comment!
Posted by Sehnsucht 16 years ago Report
And yet it's astonishing how often that advice is neglected!
I enjoyed this. Good descriptive work, and a simple and fun concept.
Posted by Izzy_Koji 16 years ago Report
Very true. There really should be some kind of educational film to ensure everyone is informed. Oh...I suppose I'm guilty of it myself. :)
Thank you; glad you enjoyed it. With this being the first story in my gallery, I was a bit nervous so it's nice to know that someone enjoyed it. Thanks!
Posted by Sparky_the_chu 16 years ago Report
aaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwweeeeesoooooomeeeee =n.n=
Posted by Izzy_Koji 16 years ago Report
Thanks, Sparky! It's great to know that one of my favorite artists enjoyed my work! :)
Posted by Sparky_the_chu 16 years ago Report
actually makes me hungry for cute squirrels! :3 *hugs* and it's no problem, you wrote this really well!
Posted by Deleteduser_120 16 years ago Report
Very nicely done. There's a good level of description in this story, and you've certainly conveyed a very tense atmosphere. The interaction between Izzy and Ara before she suddenly turns on him is a very nice touch, and you've certainly described his inner emotions well. Found a few grammatical errors, but nothing that can't be fixed. This work kind of makes me wish I could do this with my catboy character...again. Yeah - you've produced something very good as a short story.
Posted by Soulary 15 years ago Report
great story, it was very well written, good job =]