I enjoyed this story a lot, though next time you might want to put a hard vore tag on it. That way you won't catch people by surprise. Since it took a while for Trudy to start digesting maybe you could give another paragraph or two on what she felt the pred doing. Or more on what the pred did waddling around with a moving meal in her/his stomach. I feel you cut the ending a little short. You don't have to write about digestion in detail, that's optional. but there can be more describing going on about the post swallowing events. That's the best part of vore for some.
I think thesunrisemoose meant the bit where the ex wife partially chewed up the girlfriend, that probably does count as hard vore. I'll make some changes to this one and post up a revised version in the next two days.
Posted by Thesunrisemoose 15 years ago Report
I enjoyed this story a lot, though next time you might want to put a hard vore tag on it. That way you won't catch people by surprise. Since it took a while for Trudy to start digesting maybe you could give another paragraph or two on what she felt the pred doing. Or more on what the pred did waddling around with a moving meal in her/his stomach. I feel you cut the ending a little short. You don't have to write about digestion in detail, that's optional. but there can be more describing going on about the post swallowing events. That's the best part of vore for some.
Posted by YuriFan 15 years ago Report
Digestion is not hard vore.
Posted by Insidher 15 years ago Report
I think thesunrisemoose meant the bit where the ex wife partially chewed up the girlfriend, that probably does count as hard vore. I'll make some changes to this one and post up a revised version in the next two days.