Story 51

By French_snack -- Report

A new private vore for Cherry.

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Posted by Krisexy 16 years ago Report

oooonnnhhh!! tellement touchant la fin!! D': super bien imaginé :) jaime ca quand tu me fait presque pleuré XD ca prouve que tu as beaucoup de talents :)

enfin bref, jai adoré cette phrase car elle était asser frappante ;) "Her stomach groaned again, working hard at digesting her dinner. Once it was empty, it would be -

She moved her piece on the draughts board, and gave him a faint smile.

“Your turn,” she said."

et une autre que je ne retrouve pas mais qui disait genre..."she liked andré" haha! XD double sens! =P

en tout cas, tres belle histoire ^^ jai tres hâtes de voir tes prochaines oeuvres :)

Posted by French_snack 16 years ago Report

Merci beaucoup! Je suis content que ça te plaise. :)

Posted by bedfordsb 16 years ago Report

A real classic - extremely well thought out and executed. Particularly good to create a biographer for Cherry - but why wouldn;t she have one? A wide range of "slebs" attract official and non official biogphies, so as the top name in vore, Cherry would definitely qualify!

Nice to hear as well that she has a select location for private vores which are already proving popular

Posted by French_snack 16 years ago Report

Thanks! They seemed like fairly natural developments. And it should prove useful to her.

Of course, none of this would have happened if you hadn't come up with the idea of private vores in the first place, so thank you again for that!

Posted by lazylayjay 8 years ago Report

This is my favourite story involving Cherry. I would love to read that biography particularly the bit where it says "about the author" and it would say that he has been eaten by the book's subject!

Posted by French_snack 8 years ago Report

Thanks! I wonder how many copies of the book were sold, including some just for the curiosity value...