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Cruel Sound, add two By Vir -- Report

Uploaded: 14 years ago

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Naruto vore fanfiction.

Tayuya/TemariShikamaru.

Kind of an alternate history, here she survived Temari's attack and swears to make her and Shikamaru suffer.

Rated M for mature. Not too graphic, but considering how foul mouthed Tayuya are.. together with the cruelty she inflicts upon her two prey. Well, yeah.

Feedback please. ^^

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Bright

Posted by Bright 14 years ago Report

I liked it. Maybe you could describe more what the various persons look like as not everyone has seen that particular episode or read the manga.

Negator

Posted by Negator 14 years ago Report

I loved it. I think it fit the sound nin's personality very well. :)

dimensione510

Posted by dimensione510 14 years ago Report

Really good, as usual.

Vir

Posted by Vir 14 years ago Report

Thanks for the feedback. I'm considering to edit and repost an extended version of this story, so stay tuned in case I go through with it. :)

Vir

Posted by Vir 14 years ago Report

EDIT: Switched the current with the extended version. Better grammar and more action.

Date Masamune

Posted by Date Masamune 14 years ago Report

I love it keep up the good work

Kuroprinny

Posted by Kuroprinny 14 years ago Report

I'd love to see more Tayuya vore or a sequel would be excellent!!!

Flame14

Posted by Flame14 11 years ago Report

Can't believe I only just read this. It's odd, Tayuya was the only member of the sound four that I actually liked. I mean I held some respect for the spider-guy and thought Kimimaro was pretty badass but, I still didn't like them.

Will you possible be making a sequel to this where Tayuya goes after some of the other rookies?

Vir

Posted by Vir 11 years ago Report

Not very likely. At most, another one-shot might pop up in the future.

NewRebellion

Posted by NewRebellion 9 years ago Report

A rare take on Tayuya. And aside from her not digesting her victims, I quite enjoyed this story. I hope you wrote/write more like it!

nauczyciel

Posted by nauczyciel 5 years ago Report

Find myself returning to this story from time time. One of my all time favs. Hope for a sequel still remains