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While Coryn's plan to seize the major city of Ahmiran grinds towards its inevitable conclusion, an accident ends in tragedy, forcing Coryn to confront her true identity and calling all of her plans and thoughts into question.
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Posted by Negator 14 years ago Report
And with this Sakk is now my favorite character. :p
It's nice to see how conflicted Coryn really is about everything, to the point where ending it all seemed like a valid option to her in this chapter.
Posted by sansuki 14 years ago Report
She is and has been skating on the ragged edge of a complete nervous breakdown for quite a while, honestly. This just... sent her over the edge.
And yeah, Sakkateth's rapidly become my favorite character to write, too... <_< That rant was exceptionally fun to write, because I knew it was going to echo some of the thoughts a lot of readers had. :D
Posted by bebl 14 years ago Report
narf.. too much drama for me in the last few days. Two of my fav. mangas are all about drama, for.. well the last 4 weeks (weekly released) and now this.. damn you! ^^
nice chapter ;)
Posted by Imrhys 14 years ago Report
*blinks*
You... you.. killed... OMG then the... OMG.
I'm glad you gave her the ability to put herself back, because I have mightily resisted massive changes to various characters I have RP'ed over the last 27yrs. Even force retired one I loved after he was completely emmolated and for whatever reason the DM thought it a good idea to leave him permanently mutilated. I loved that character but i could not stomach the changes to him. Of course now i know I could have done things for him. Things I now do for characters myself in stories and things I run myself.
I could strangle you for where this leaves off *growls at the writer for the new changes in writing frequency*, but it makes me deeply curious as to what Coryn really is >_>
I guess this forces me to write for you the chapter explaining what Minx is <_<
Posted by sansuki 14 years ago Report
Just as a caution:
There IS a difference between shapeshifting and changing who you 'really' are.
And that's all I'll say for now... :)
Posted by Imrhys 14 years ago Report
I was trying to not spoil things too badly XD