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Wow, it’s been a long time since I have posted here.
Anyway, a few months ago I decided that my old “Lynn’s Lunch Break” was shamefully poorly written so I decided to rewrite it. This was the result.
Critique and comments are very much appreciated.
Felarya belongs to Karbo, I just play in there sometimes.
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Posted by Hooligan 14 years ago Report
Very good read. <3 Will there be any illustrations for it?
Posted by BardicLasher 14 years ago Report
Very good read, but I was a bit dissapointed that so many of the eatings were instant, 'off screen' instances. I'd have much rather prefered 'seeing' her eat more of her friends to them just dissapearing like they did.
Posted by TableManners 14 years ago Report
This story is awesome in so many ways! Thank you so much!
Posted by Maexam2 12 years ago Report
What species is Oliver?
Is he a turtle?
If not, then what is he?
Posted by Maexam2 12 years ago Report
Sorry.
Nevermind my question.
Posted by TheStatue 11 years ago Report
Do her friends actually end up getting digested?
Posted by Zalzas 11 years ago Report
Saddly, yes. Lynn is a bit of an impulsive airhead, and has trouble keeping long term acquaintances.
Posted by TheStatue 11 years ago Report
:'(