This is a bit different from my other stuff, and not just in that it's M/F. This isn't as funny, it's almost a satire without as many jokes.

The rest of my stuff has some occasional messages, or themes, particularly the Juno series, but this almost entirely symbolism, and I can think of several ways to interpret it. Whether it is good, or bad, I'll let you judge.


Also, did you know that I set out to make a more modern version of the Three Little Pigs? I wonder if any catches the similarities...

Also, like all my stuff, this was written in one session and submitted the same day, because otherwise my motivation fades and I don't finish it. Yes, this is my justifying the short length and any lack of quality.

Anyway, enjoy, and please leave feedback. Please. Even if you don't like it, but then try and be constructive.

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