I usually wouldn't like when real animals and Pokémon are in the same story, but this is an exception. Great story. :) Before I go any further let me just say that this didn't turn me on at all. This being a site for voraphiles, I thought this information would be pertinent. ^_^; I was more interested in the, albeit shallow, relationship between the pichu and David. It was a good peice of writing, and if you take out the part about him getting turned on/creaming his pants could easily be made "safe" and this would be a very nice revenge story. And if you go the other way and make it dirtier, for my taste. he would have to do a little bestiality and f*** pichu. Ofcourse eitherway it would have to end with a raichu eating everybody. XD If you're interested in my ideas for a rewrite/continuation drop me a line and I'll help with it. Heck! I might even write part of it to help out. X)
Oh! Before I forget! I gotz ta give ya mad props (lol) for picking a pichu instead of something obvious. Like swalot, gulpin, muk, grimer, ditto, lickitung, lickylicky, etc., etc. (I think I misspelled a couple of those. ^_^;)
Posted by Crushermach3 14 years ago Report
I usually wouldn't like when real animals and Pokémon are in the same story, but this is an exception. Great story. :) Before I go any further let me just say that this didn't turn me on at all. This being a site for voraphiles, I thought this information would be pertinent. ^_^; I was more interested in the, albeit shallow, relationship between the pichu and David. It was a good peice of writing, and if you take out the part about him getting turned on/creaming his pants could easily be made "safe" and this would be a very nice revenge story. And if you go the other way and make it dirtier, for my taste. he would have to do a little bestiality and f*** pichu. Ofcourse eitherway it would have to end with a raichu eating everybody. XD If you're interested in my ideas for a rewrite/continuation drop me a line and I'll help with it. Heck! I might even write part of it to help out. X)
Posted by Crushermach3 14 years ago Report
Oh! Before I forget! I gotz ta give ya mad props (lol) for picking a pichu instead of something obvious. Like swalot, gulpin, muk, grimer, ditto, lickitung, lickylicky, etc., etc. (I think I misspelled a couple of those. ^_^;)
Posted by Agora 14 years ago Report
It wasn't exactly "picked" as it was just my favorite pokemanz at the time ;)