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Pichu pred, human male prey.
I realized too late that having an old man as the prey is kind of a turn off, when you think about it! Still an OK story in my book :P
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Posted by Rich 14 years ago Report
And Here I thought the daughter of the freelancer was going to be the prey. Still not bad, could always do an alternate ending where the pichu gets hungry in the middle of the night.
Posted by Agora 14 years ago Report
Hahaha, oh man, I didn't even REMEMBER that! I had written the daughter in for the sole purpose of throwing people off and making it the surprise that it's the man getting eaten!
I'm sure that was another reason why I got bad comments for the old man being the victim in the end, lulz.