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A priestess and her foreign lover go to the local temple for a very fun little ritual!
Involves busty women getting plastered and eating each other, and various other naughtiness. Now, to try and work on things I actually owe people x.x Also! If you find any spelling errors, or have any other constructive criticism, I wanna hear from ya!
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Posted by justaname333 14 years ago Report
Great story, I honestly didn't notice find any glaring mistakes myself, the only issues I have are simply matters of preference, for example I would have loved to see some description of what Jenny and Aiana were experiencing as Ari's plump orbs, such as what they were seeing, feeling, etc. Though I have little doubt they weren't enjoying their time greatly.
Although I understand that you have requests from others to complete, I would love to see a continuation of this, such an obvious sequel hook is just begging to be fulfilled someday!
Posted by 4ofSwords 14 years ago Report
Nicely done!
Posted by Slash 14 years ago Report
Lovely Story. :3
Posted by FrostByte 14 years ago Report
Wonderful story Klin! Voluptuous vixens, ample asses, titanic titties, drunken deities...it's a fetish buffet. =)
Posted by Liz 14 years ago Report
Lovely story indeed :D
Posted by BardicLasher 14 years ago Report
Great story!
Posted by Gypa 14 years ago Report
I did love to see what the main party was about.
Posted by KlinKitty 14 years ago Report
You may see it eventually, if my writer's block cooperates.
Posted by Gypa 12 years ago Report
You defenetly need make that party sequel
Posted by rugli 10 years ago Report
Me too, did love to see the main party :)
Posted by rugli 10 years ago Report
Me too, did love to see the main party :)