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Left: October 2008.
Right: March 2011.
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Posted by FanficFetishist 14 years ago Report
Stylish. :D
Posted by MMMToast 14 years ago Report
shes come a looooong way
Posted by Delet932b4sk 14 years ago Report
Very nice :3
Posted by Liz 14 years ago Report
I like both of them - how ever right version has some more style to it.
Posted by FrostByte 14 years ago Report
Great job, Requiem. Kaninchen just gets hotter and hotter.
Posted by kernac 14 years ago Report
I kinda like her old style a little better acctualy.
Posted by Requiem 14 years ago Report
...mind saying *why*?!
Posted by iliapoerion 14 years ago Report
*disclaimer* I've never studied art at all, and the vast majority of the points given were just personal preference... I also ramble a lot. If you prefer your new style, then by all means, please keep drawing with it.
I kind of agree with Kernac, though mostly due to my personal preferences. The newer Kaninchen has bigger hips, which isn't to my taste, though I certainly don't mind it. She also seems more... animal-like? Not like a furry, but like you've gotten so used to drawing somewhat furry people that the basics of that style are leaking into Kaninchen. She IS a rabbit-doctor, according to your earlier works, but that wasn't as present in the face, and I preferred the more human-like face.
Her left hand seems much better in the older version. Shading on the torso of the older one looks better, but the shading on the new one, particularly the arms and hair, is better overall. The lines, the ink part, is definitely better in the newer version. It has some variety and emphasizes certain points.
The face of the new Kaninchen seems almost hidden, as if pushed to the background by the jutting breasts and ears which flop over the face. The face always sis one of the most important parts of a character, and not emphasizing it makes her seem like more of a fetish character than is... I dunno... Necessary?
The shoulders of the newer one seem more natural, but the neck seems less so.
Umm... I prefer the older eyes.
P.S. Even with everything I said put together, any art from you is still great and enjoyable to read/look at, as well as your often amusing titles/descriptions. Your output, particularly of vore scenes, seems to have declined of late, and while that is certainly none of my business, it made me a little sad, since I've always enjoyed your work. A lot of your older work experimented with poses that I had never seen before. A centaur eating a naga? A centaur eating a centaur? Both of these species seem to be rather neglected as prey in part because people don't really know how to draw them, yet you did, and it looked good.
I'm rambling now, so... Yeah. I really, really like both. I just like the older one slightly more.
Posted by Requiem 14 years ago Report
Hm...you bring up some interesting points. One thing I am intent on doing is going back and un-simplifying how I draw faces. As far as my lowered output on vorish works, pretty much I had stopped drinking Vault shortly after my grandmother's funeral last year, and didn't start drinking it again until a few weeks ago.
I have always strived to improve myself, and want to continue to do so.
Posted by kernac 14 years ago Report
I'm sorry, I did not wanted to sound negative. I think you improved your drawing thats for sure, but the old outfit had some kind of latex-jumpsuit vibe and it just seems a tad more sexy then the new version. No offense intended.
Posted by ndnode 14 years ago Report
one thing I can say about your work is that its always so "juicy" to look at, I'll have to try my hand at drawing Kaninchen, she looks fun to draw ^_^
Posted by Requiem 14 years ago Report
I'd be much obliged!
Posted by Mild_Concussion 14 years ago Report
Why for do you claim you're not getting better? This should prove you wrong right here!
Posted by Scaylid00d 14 years ago Report
Improvements are very evident! ^w^ Awesome work on them both, in the end really ♥