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Okay, this is a weird one. Basically, I wanted to write a story from a different perspective, from a narrator that's loonier then Loon Mountain. Why? Because crazy people are fun if you don't know them in real life, and doubly so if their the murderous type.
The results are mixed, but possibly enjoyable. Also, sorry for taking so long to make a new one, I'm lazy and have had compute problems.
One final thing. It may be perceived that I am knocking religion throughout the story. That is not my intent. Instead, I was attempting to show how blind faith and religion have been used by manipulative people to get what they want, demonstrated by having a crazy guy running around eating people. It makes sense in context (not really).
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Posted by ironman362 14 years ago Report
When i was reading at times it felt like the narrator was a locust from Gears of War
Posted by dimensione510 14 years ago Report
Interesting. I've never played those games (don't have an Xbox) but still sort of cool.
Did you like the story?
Posted by ironman362 14 years ago Report
yeah i would have preferred it if the psycho was female but still good
Posted by Indighost 14 years ago Report
A very creatively written M/F story. While I am not usually an M/F person, the interesting way this story was told really drew me in. Could use some grammar/spell checks, but otherwise very well done!
Posted by dimensione510 14 years ago Report
Yeah, I started to lose my mind writing in that style, and then switching to normal style when writing to friends on other sites (don't want to sound even more psychotic to them), so the grammar suffered a lot. I suppose I could chock it up to the character having a poor education until I get around to fixing it...
Thanks for the feedback, anyway.