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I love Madoka Magica so much. I had to write something.
Had to kinda rush the story along not to drag it on for too long, but I think I nailed a good ratio, and I'm happy with the vore bits :D
Since there's a lot of stuff being posted on regular forums with characters visibly in their teens, I decided to not worry about adding a loli tag to this. My last story really had a young protagonist, but here they're much older. Please don't rip my face off.
Homu Homu! (Enjoy responsibly!)
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Posted by Milliways 14 years ago Report
WOAH! AWESOME! HOLY SHIT!
/snake
No seriously though, this is awesome.
Forced pred is hawt as hell, and the mouthplay descriptions are lovely <3 Hope to see more stories soon :D
Posted by Agora 14 years ago Report
Unwilling pred is indeed a gift from the heavens.
Much warm rays of appreciation are going your way, sir!
Had you seen the anime beforehand, though? I'm really curious to know if I managed to make it kinda understandable even to those who didn't see it.
And you guys kill me inside when you hope for new stories as soon as I post one, lol. They will come if inspiration and time both deign me worthy of their attention ;)
Posted by Milliways 14 years ago Report
No I did not, however I'm a whore and skipped most of the story to get right to the vore/mouthplay ololol
Posted by Agora 14 years ago Report
You naughty dog, you!
Posted by Indighost 14 years ago Report
I found the expository information a little confusing, but then I haven't watched the show. Once the vorish part began, however, I enjoyed this story very much :) Agora, you are really a master of reluctant eaters. By "Ratio", did you mean the porn / plot ratio?
Posted by Agora 14 years ago Report
Ahh too bad, I put some effort into suming up the story a bit in the eventuality that people would read it without seeing the anime, but I guess it wasn't enough! Guess that disclaimer at the start was good for something.
Thanks for the compliment, I guess it really is my strength eh? Not sure what that says about me, though. lulz.
And yes, the ratio was plot/porn :P The golden ratio.
Posted by Indighost 14 years ago Report
:) Just curious, what's your ideal ratio?
Posted by Agora 14 years ago Report
I never thought about putting percentages to it! But I'd say that, from the stories I read, I put a much larger emphasis on the vore/porn bits than most.
Way I see it, these stories are meant to be turns ons, so if the porn bit is over in 3 sentences... what's the point? You wanted the reader to reflect on the story and expand upon it in his head while he jerks off later on? :P
So a good ratio would probably something like half plot/half porn, or 66/33 at worst. Enough plot to make you care and put you in the situation you want the characters to be in without feeling rushed, and enough vorish scenes to make it worth your time. Not saying I've always attained such a ratio, though, not like I actively plan around it :P
Posted by Indighost 14 years ago Report
Agreed! I don't see the point in a porn story that takes 75% of it to build up, especially if half the characters are going to get eaten at the end :)
Although I myself feel the need to push it up to 85-90% as long as I can fetishize enough of the ordinary plot events :3 Plus, I think that if your story happens to include "romance" and "sex", the romance can act as a turn-on and a character-building at the same time.
Posted by Agora 14 years ago Report
This is true, I've been experimenting with the sex bits in the last two stories, and I feel they do help keeping the reader's attention, but the thing is... I'm such a loli fan that I feel it'd get labeled as underaged porn if I went any further, so I've been keeping it rather light.
There's also a part of me that realizes I'm not writing porn stories and feel I'm pushing something onto my readers that they won't necessarily care about :x
Posted by Indighost 14 years ago Report
You're right, it's ultimately a matter of personal judgment. I think you should keep doing what you feel is the best balance between perversion and propriety :)
Posted by GTSdev 13 years ago Report
Hello agora, this story cought my attention, i will definally think about a visual about this as soon as im done with my corrent work :3
Posted by Agora 13 years ago Report
Ohhh you actually read it! :')
I love giving back to the artists I support, so it means a lot to me that you enjoyed it <3
I will eagerly anticipate anything you can dish out!
Posted by Ragnarahk 13 years ago Report
... Kinda dark but from what I've heard of this anime, this should fit the mood pretty well. LOVED how you described the mouth.
Posted by Agora 13 years ago Report
Ah~ Thanks for checking out my stuff XD I'll definitely check out your other stories (although the one I read was an RP) as well!
I guess you can feel a bit bad about the way Madoka's treated in here, especially when you consider this timeline will undoubtedly end with the city getting completely destroyed XD But Homura did it out of love :3
Hey, at least you enjoyed the vorish bits!
Posted by SpotLight 9 years ago Report
Worst anime ever