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My first piece here! You'll know it if you've been to my DA account. Screamer gets a little stuck one day and learns the consequences.
I like to write for emotions, so that's my main focus here. The emotions of the unwilling pred are definitely interesting.
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Posted by Cerulesta 13 years ago Report
I must admit, this is pretty much the exact opposite of the way I've portrayed and imagined Starscream as a predator, but... that really isn't the point here, merely an observation. Because I like this, a lot. I can't say that on many occasions I've come across a scenario where the predatory party reacts in this fashion, and it's rather fascinating, intriguing to consider. And perhaps more psychologically realistic, in a way, than a lot of more "typical" portrayals are. ... My one worry is that, well, if this is your opinion on how Starscream would act, I can only hope that you aren't bothered by my rendition of him as considerably <i>less</i> than unwilling.
Regardless, this was very well written, and you get a lot of props for exploring an area of mentality that I hadn't even thought about until now. <3 And for writing Starscream eating people, FFFFF. YES. To see good Transformers vore stuff from other people makes me really giddy; it isn't as though it's the most popular subject matter, even if it does seem to be gaining a little ground.
Posted by Redglide 13 years ago Report
Thank you so much :3
I'm not bothered by your version of Screamer at all. In fact, I really thing G1 Starscream WOULD enjoy predation. I mainly write for the Animated continuity, so I consider them different people :)
Not that I wouldn't LOVE to get Animated Screamer into the feeling, but...well, he needs some convincing <3
I'm planning on doing a sequel for this if I can get the outline straight,
So glad you like how it's written ^.^
Posted by Cerulesta 13 years ago Report
Oh! I didn't actually know that's the version you were using-- I guess I should have assumed as much, though, considering that your icon is Animated!Megatron. That makes a lot of sense, as the two are distinctly different, even while being the "same" character.
I'm really glad we can each have our own renditions, and that both of us can enjoy what the other chooses to depict. And if you do write a sequel, I will most certainly read it!
Posted by Redglide 13 years ago Report
:3 Thank you. I guess I should make that more clear in the future which version I'm doing since there are so many XD