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Yes, it's finally here! I've actually recieved several requests to do a sequal, and although this might not be what many of you had in mind, it is what I had planned to do all along for The Clinic, a way to get all the single, short scenes down on paper in a definitive story
The original...the Pilot if you like, can be found here http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4247825/ or http://aryion.com/g4/view/193448 (AV)
My first attempt at Cockvore, I think I pulled it off quite nicely, what do you think?
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Posted by theheadsn 13 years ago Report
About dang time! haha as good of a story as the first :) Makes you feel any better this is pretty much how I saw the story going. Keep up the awesome work, I'd love for you to keep writing more. Issacs a good main character, but its cool how you give out so much detail for the patients.
Posted by soline 13 years ago Report
haha, thanks XD. I was aiming for Isaac as the eye of the storm so to speak, with new 'main characters' each episode. It sounds like I've hit the right ball then.
Posted by theheadsn 13 years ago Report
Just don't take another year to write a 3rd chapter haha its hard to come by good stories these days
Posted by Houyo 13 years ago Report
This was a neat story. Really liked the hope spot, it was really cruel to give that bunny on last look of day light before going back down. Don't get to see that often.
Posted by TootCore 9 years ago Report
You write some of the best cock Vore around, based on the description of how the victims inside are affected by the outside movement.