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A catgirl, a mermaid, a blue princess and a necromancer take to the high seas of Felarya in search of treasure, but they find a whole lot more besides.
Long, and not all that vore-heavy, but I like the way it turned out anyway.
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Posted by Sy0p 13 years ago Report
A very enjoyable story! Long, but definitely worth it. The language was extremely vivid, and I couldn't help but love the characters as well. 'course, I was a little sad about Nina's fate, but so it goes.
Well done, dood.
Posted by PrinnyDood 13 years ago Report
Thank you! I must admit I rather liked Nina, and was rather torn about killing her off. But that's the way the Felaryan cookie crumbles. XD
Posted by Indighost 13 years ago Report
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My mind = blown.
Completely.
This was a big, fun, rollicking adventure story. It reads like a wonderful long sunday afternoon D&D session. The characters were extremely well developed. The language pushed overwrought without going over it. Awesome. :D
My only complaint would be that the only adjective used to describe naked women was "naked", and since I have seen more than one woman naked, and I know that their parts, such as breasts, are each very unique, I would have liked to hear more description of their differences. But I thought that this might be part of the Felarya "tastefulness" tradition where nothing gets too explicit or sexual. Is this on the mark?
Posted by PrinnyDood 13 years ago Report
Thank you so much! I do have a tendency to get a little flowery with my language, so I'm glad you don't think I went over the edge here. :D
And yes, I've always rather thought a (stunningly lethal) D&D campaign set in Felarya might be fun, and that belief was part of the inspiration for this.
As for the nakedness issue, yes, primarily I was attempting to keep it more or less 'tasteful', since it was in fact an entry into a contest on DeviantArt, as well.
I do also have a tenancy to gloss over the more specific details of anatomy even when I'm writing pure fetish though, partly because to much feels a little weird written from a female character's perspective, (which is about 90% of my stuff), and because if I leave more for the reader to 'fill in the gaps', I can (theoretically) please a wider audience. Perhaps I should reassess that though, eh? XD
Posted by Indighost 13 years ago Report
lol! Yes, the floweryness in language was perfect. It was just very contrasting to the surprising blandness of the nude women ;) And to be fair, the story was written in 3rd person. But all in all, its up to you. This is a fetish site, you write to present us with your own fantasies. And anyway as I said before, the entertainment value of the story was far beyond that of any ordinary fetish story.