Thank you for your comments and favorites, I'm glad you're enjoying the series so far! It really drives me to try and find better ways to write my stories.
Enjoying? Hell no Vuin! I'm LOVING the series! I'm also astonished at how fast you're going. Honestly if I didn't go through EVERY latest submission daily on Eka's I'd have watched you six times over by now!
I'm not the only one saddened to see Mala go so soon, perhaps you might consider doing an offshoot of the series when you have time? either something non-canonical or an 'old' mission, with Mala enjoying her job to it's fullest...
I think it's pretty healthy to knock -off come characters with depth in writing. It makes you consider the other character much more. Also, makes you realize that anyone of them can bite it if there not careful. It keeps you reading, with uncertainty to what will happen next. With a job like theirs, catching vorish, depraved criminals. It's not likely that everyone is going to make it, at the end of the day. Great job.
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Posted by soline 14 years ago Report
Yet more excellence! A shame Mala is gone but I just hope Ooma gets the fox in the end! That was so close!
Posted by Vuin 14 years ago Report
Thank you for your comments and favorites, I'm glad you're enjoying the series so far! It really drives me to try and find better ways to write my stories.
Posted by soline 14 years ago Report
Enjoying? Hell no Vuin! I'm LOVING the series! I'm also astonished at how fast you're going. Honestly if I didn't go through EVERY latest submission daily on Eka's I'd have watched you six times over by now!
I'm not the only one saddened to see Mala go so soon, perhaps you might consider doing an offshoot of the series when you have time? either something non-canonical or an 'old' mission, with Mala enjoying her job to it's fullest...
Posted by dagar 14 years ago Report
This is really sad for me >.< I had high hopes she'd be rescued! >.<
Posted by soline 14 years ago Report
Me too, she was such an excellent character! Ahh well, if anyone had to replace her 'voracious fem' in the series I'm glad it's Ooma!
Posted by dagar 14 years ago Report
Yea, but I'd grown attached to her.... >.< Maybe a plot device will bring her back? I can still hope can't I? XD
Posted by Slash 14 years ago Report
I think it's pretty healthy to knock -off come characters with depth in writing. It makes you consider the other character much more. Also, makes you realize that anyone of them can bite it if there not careful. It keeps you reading, with uncertainty to what will happen next. With a job like theirs, catching vorish, depraved criminals. It's not likely that everyone is going to make it, at the end of the day. Great job.