Okay...first of all, anybody who thought up a plan depending on a human being able to walk into a vore den as would-be prey and *not* be stripped at the earliest opportunity was feasible needs to have their head examined. Assuming they still have one when everything is over, of course. :)
Second, the little anti-human hate speech I could probably have done without. We already pretty much knew going in that the group had an anti-human agenda, and the rhetoric was rather weak and unconvincing -- you'd think a real anthro with a personal grudge against humans would have some *real* human atrocities to cite instead of merely spouting vague platitudes. (Which leads me to my current theory that the figure under the mask is actually a demented human -- possibly even a closet vore fan -- him- or herself...)
And third, to end on a positive note: it's nice to see Ooma again. Yes, she's one of the bad guys, but there's just something *hot* about perfectly unapologetic preds with just the right knack for enjoying their meals. ;)
As for the hooded mastermind, I'm puting money on it being an antho-cockroach.
I was sad to see Dredge go, was just getting to know the gruff officer, but when Ooma struggled and stretched herself over him, wow. (vore, hot, microvore, hotter)
Aggh, woulda killed for some more dialogue from Lanni during certain parts, much as I can understand her not being quite so able to express. More of her and Ooma, please.
Posted by dagar 13 years ago Report
Malla's back? B-but Dredge had to go now! Can't complain about Tek ^^; didn't know em long enough ^^;
Posted by Mark 13 years ago Report
Okay...first of all, anybody who thought up a plan depending on a human being able to walk into a vore den as would-be prey and *not* be stripped at the earliest opportunity was feasible needs to have their head examined. Assuming they still have one when everything is over, of course. :)
Second, the little anti-human hate speech I could probably have done without. We already pretty much knew going in that the group had an anti-human agenda, and the rhetoric was rather weak and unconvincing -- you'd think a real anthro with a personal grudge against humans would have some *real* human atrocities to cite instead of merely spouting vague platitudes. (Which leads me to my current theory that the figure under the mask is actually a demented human -- possibly even a closet vore fan -- him- or herself...)
And third, to end on a positive note: it's nice to see Ooma again. Yes, she's one of the bad guys, but there's just something *hot* about perfectly unapologetic preds with just the right knack for enjoying their meals. ;)
Posted by soline 13 years ago Report
whooooo! Awesome episode! And better written as well! You're improving!
By the way, have you considered uploading these to Furaffinity? you'll probably get much more feedback over there.
Posted by Vuin 13 years ago Report
Wasn't really aware Furaffinity dabbled in this type of material.
Posted by soline 13 years ago Report
oh definately, there's a massive vore fanbase over there
Posted by Morphy 13 years ago Report
Gotta say I am really enjoying this series.
As for the hooded mastermind, I'm puting money on it being an antho-cockroach.
I was sad to see Dredge go, was just getting to know the gruff officer, but when Ooma struggled and stretched herself over him, wow. (vore, hot, microvore, hotter)
Posted by Slash 13 years ago Report
Well written. :3
Posted by Decimos 13 years ago Report
Aggh, woulda killed for some more dialogue from Lanni during certain parts, much as I can understand her not being quite so able to express. More of her and Ooma, please.
Posted by Sora 13 years ago Report
I thoroughly enjoyed that Vuin. The anal vore really painted an erotic picture in my mind. Bravo!