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Part two of my ongoing short story about two friends that make a bet over who can fit the most inside their vaginas.
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Posted by spectrume 13 years ago Report
Great story so far. The dialogue as well as the characters actions are well described, letting one imagine what is going on at all times.
Looking forward to seeing the boyfriend join in the fun!
Posted by yummytummy 13 years ago Report
Hehehe, then you'll like the next part :)
Posted by fried24 13 years ago Report
getting good now
Posted by fried24 13 years ago Report
also "o bad" i think you mean "all bad"
Posted by yummytummy 13 years ago Report
yeah, sometimes I get ahead of myself and don't catch errors like that, thanks!
Posted by fried24 13 years ago Report
no prob
Posted by Demihunger 13 years ago Report
I like what you have written so far. Kind of nice since it lighthearted.
Posted by LillyBells 13 years ago Report
I like it i hope the 3rd part is as good as this and the 1st cause that would be awesome c:
Posted by shabbacabba 13 years ago Report
My favorite unbirthing story yet! n_n
Posted by LillyBells 13 years ago Report
To bad no part 3 will come :c
Posted by shabbacabba 13 years ago Report
Aww. Well I'll read anything you produce in the future. :)
Posted by LillyBells 13 years ago Report
Its not my story ;o but the owner isinactive if part 3 comes then ots gonna take long
Posted by shabbacabba 13 years ago Report
Ah I see. Well give my regards to the author then. :)
Posted by yummytummy 13 years ago Report
It says "To be Continued"
:)
Posted by LillyBells 13 years ago Report
Well no offense yummy but alot of great artists suddenly leave cause of some reason....you never know that's why i said if part 3 will come it's going to take a bbit longer than usual so i guess be patient is what we have to do x3
Posted by yummytummy 13 years ago Report
It's okay, I'm moving between computers at the moment and trying to get my own so I will be able to stay constant with posting stuff here on Ekas, but your assumptions are entirely true- I get bored with stories sometimes and it can take me a while to finish them.
Posted by Groblek 13 years ago Report
I'm familiar with getting bored with stories, or otherwise blocked. It's why I no longer post incomplete works or tell people what I think my next one will be - I'm wrong too often.
Posted by ilovevore123 12 years ago Report
Come on, man. We want more. Also, keep up the great work. I love your stories.
Posted by LillyBells 12 years ago Report
yummyyyy will you ever finish this? it's a very great story it'd be sad if you don't wanna finish it but i understand you're probaly to busy , that's why i'm asking if you ever will :3
Posted by SooperWooper 12 years ago Report
Boy oh boy! I love seeing a "To Be Continued!" Gets me all excited thinking about the possibilities!
Posted by Goblingobler 10 years ago Report
I would looove to see a sequel to this! Oh my god I read this and it was one of my first unbirth stories that I read on here. But that was before I had an eka's account so I lost this for a bit. Glad I found it to read again ^-^
Posted by Ev0nix 2 years ago Report
Damn I wish this was completed