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Page 6 of a commission from trh7323
Bustling through the waves and tides of the shifting crowd, the huntress shortens the trail to her mark; passing through the small slips of air with skill only her kind could posses. So close to who she wants, so close she can't help her dark presence be felt by the sultry vamp before her. Like a moth to a flame, the young beauty turns, compelled to face the embodiment of lustful sins that define her very nature. She's not sure if it's the power of the pulsing beat of the bass coursing through body, the aroma off the gorgeous stranger so intoxicating it practically takes control of her soul, or just the two heaving masses overpowering her own chest. But the sudden tension washes over, leaving her a taste of bliss and only a desire to remain embraced in masses of this voluptuous vixen in white. The dark angel only smiles as the sultry fool is enthralled, easily succumbing to her whim with merely her presence. A moth to a flame.
It's been a couple days since I shaded the last few pages and I feel like I fell out of the flow of things. I'm either making mistakes, or I'm forgetting the technique I used in the previous pages. But over all I'm satisfied with what came out. If I have to make a comment about anything, it's that I need to be more consistent with facial features. The shape of the girl's eyes change from one panel to the next, and if you couldn't tell already, she's supposed to be Asian. I'm hoping to reach the point where I can make the race easily to tell w/o any color or tone.
This was the last pre-mapped out page in my disposal, which means for you guys that it's gonna be a little while before I can work out the new pages. Plus I'm taking 16hrs in college this is semester, so it's only gonna make things a bit slower :(
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Posted by TheWickedKing 13 years ago Report
The wings on the shadowy Huntress' figure in the first panel is a very nice touch. =)
Posted by KlinKitty 13 years ago Report
Mmm, very nice. Gotta love those nice, huge, smushy tits :3
Gotta wonder how they got so big, too. I wonder if our little friend will find out.
Posted by CVLVR 13 years ago Report
I think she will find out.
The hard way. *evil grin, cue ominous music*
Posted by Shryland 13 years ago Report
Personally I think you all will be surprised >:)
Posted by anonymoussecake 13 years ago Report
Just commenting on how much you seem to be stressing about this. I understand the need to do a good job and everything, and I'm sure you can see more than I can since I'm not much of an artist. But these seriously look incredible. Keep up the good work and don't worry so much =)
Posted by Max_C 13 years ago Report
hhmmmm.... there seems to be some kind of smoke "essence" emanating from our little moth girl. The pred's breasts also got much bigger in the last frame. Could this be a breast absorption vore story? (I hope I hope I hope)
Yeah, I know how much it sucks to forget your technique between pictures. I've had to relearn several techniques, too. Still, I wouldn't have noticed anything if you hadn't made mention of it. That last frame is freaking delicious!!!!
Posted by Shryland 13 years ago Report
lol I thought the breasts shrank a little bit from last page, so I boosted them up a little bit. Again, all consistency issues :P
lol I don't think the position those breasts are in is even possible
Posted by joeburp22181 13 years ago Report
Looking good so far,
Thanks Shryland
Posted by Shryland 13 years ago Report
Grazie :)
Posted by ThisUserIsFake 13 years ago Report
I'm not a GREAT artist, but as far as making her look more asian, i usually give the eyes a bit of an incline with relation to the nose. Even so, solid work dude.
Posted by Shryland 13 years ago Report
True, but I think it depends on the Asian. Like, Chinese don't have eyes that slant up, at least the ones I've met didn't. Again I think its just a consistency issue.
Posted by icn 13 years ago Report
Wasn't she looking at the other one two pages ago?
Posted by Shryland 13 years ago Report
My reasoning is this, what girl in a club dances in one spot for any length of time? Perhaps she's tipsy and happily drunk dancing by herself now? Lol I dunno, I have to move the comic along and I this is how I wanted to introduce the vixen to the group of girls.
Posted by Hexxia 13 years ago Report
I'm very interested in seeing where this goes. ^^
Posted by Indighost 13 years ago Report
Awesome as always.
Posted by Liz 13 years ago Report
Looks like the hungry predator has found her first target.
Posted by MrQuarantine 13 years ago Report
Its bout to get goooood lol love the 1st panel btw
Posted by giggityman69 13 years ago Report
Your synopsis is poetic...and dirty. Oh, the picture's good too! lol
Posted by unholyman 13 years ago Report
if my boner is anything to go by this is going to be some hot shit.
Posted by Imrhys 13 years ago Report
Interesting. I had forgotten about this series. Glad to see you still working on it, but my soul vore and mind control loves both wonder what that smoke in the final panel is >_>
Posted by Shryland 13 years ago Report
It's essentially showing the girl is falling under some "trance", making the demon able to move in on her target
Posted by Imrhys 13 years ago Report
You have made me a happy demoness *cheers the huntress on*
Posted by Imrhys 13 years ago Report
I was also half asleep when I originally commented to this and now I have read the description through and feel silly, lol. Yeeessss, it is obvious the mind of the prey has been--overcome, deliciously. *encourages the artist onward*
Posted by Shryland 13 years ago Report
Onward I go >;)
Posted by sadisticflirt 13 years ago Report
The rest please.
Posted by RubytheWitch20 13 years ago Report
when is the next page