Phone Call
By BizzareBlue -- Report
This is much shorter and less descriptive than my previous upload, but strikes me as a more interesting idea.
I enjoy playing with the idea of predators and prey living together in a modern city, and flatmates in particular seem to have a variety of interesting interactions.
Again if there is anything you can see that I could improve, please tell me.
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Posted by Fischie 14 years ago Report
It's a really interesting concept. To me the only flaw was its shortness. You are certainly right when you say that this scenery holds great opportunities.
Posted by BizzareBlue 14 years ago Report
Longer next time, got it. Glad to hear that I caught you interest.
Posted by Indighost 14 years ago Report
A nice vignette. I think it nicely sets the mood of a casual relatinship and Sara, while mighty and even glorious in form, as a sort of lazy and messy person. It's a good contrast.
Posted by BizzareBlue 14 years ago Report
Thank you, short as it was I was pleased with how it came out and hope to use Sara again in future.
Also I've just learnt a new word, now I will have to find ways to work vignette into conversations.
Posted by miranda_dragon 14 years ago Report
Yes yes yes love it!
Posted by BizzareBlue 14 years ago Report
Thank you, and thank you for the watch.