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A continuation of "The Rat" and "The Fourth Virtue" story-lines.

The scene returns to the rat, Tarik, alone in his burrow after his encounter with the grey feline, Tabatha.

He's not fairing well.

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Written by me and Tabatha_Cat through RP

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nyanyan

Posted by nyanyan 13 years ago Report

I must admit, you and your friends know how to work together on these RPs.

Case-in-point: if I had a bar that showed how close to an emotional action I was at, I'd be at about 70% to crying...that's about where, while there's no actual tears, you feel like they might pop up at any point and your eyes are a little more moist than usual(pretty big accomplishment in my book...I don't show emotions easily...I didn't even cry at the funeral for my great grandpa, least I don't think I did...>.>...I know...I'm a heartless person...*starts crying* xP).

either that or I didn't blink enough while reading...you can decide xP

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