Eat and be Eaten
By DrakeZephyr -- Report
This is a little piece requested by dragon_lady.
While returning from work, Kenneth finds a stray cat and takes it home, only to find his dog doesn't like the new addition, and his method of showing it gives Kenneth ideas...
I wasn't feeling too good about my first request, but it received praise so I hope you all like it
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Posted by dragon_lady 14 years ago Report
Again, read this 3 times and I gotta say great work I know I said it earlier but truely your work is great, and thanks for the request ^^
Posted by DrakeZephyr 14 years ago Report
You're welcome ^^ It was a pleasure
Posted by anyonarex 14 years ago Report
nice, I like the build up and both of the scenarios. :D more detail would be awesome though, detail is everything.
Posted by DrakeZephyr 14 years ago Report
Hmm, interesting, where specifically have I lacked on enough detail, that I may improve in future
Posted by anyonarex 14 years ago Report
hmm....I suppose the whole taste thing is something you didn't go into much detail on. (although that might be personal preference)
Posted by DrakeZephyr 14 years ago Report
Certainly I didn't go into taste, though it's something I often miss, I suppose I just never know what to put there, it's hard to describe what I can't imagine
Posted by anyonarex 14 years ago Report
yeah...thats true.
Posted by DrakeZephyr 14 years ago Report
Thanks for the comment though, I'll try to keep it in mind when I write in future