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A little story written for Reiko starring herself.
Contains F/FF

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OrzhovSun99

Posted by OrzhovSun99 12 years ago Report

Very nice leviathin. Is there perhaps a sequel?

Entity

Posted by Entity 12 years ago Report

i'm afraid to say that there is no sequel and probaly won't be butthat's not to say there won't be another story involving Reiko :)

sgtpepper500

Posted by sgtpepper500 12 years ago Report

I liked the description of the digestion and belleh. Oh so good xD.

Entity

Posted by Entity 12 years ago Report

I'm glad you liked it . ;)

delet0h2b69

Posted by delet0h2b69 12 years ago Report

That's horrible and so sad :(

Entity

Posted by Entity 12 years ago Report

how so ?

delet0h2b69

Posted by delet0h2b69 12 years ago Report

Well because she eats people? One of which is just an innocent kid, and the other a beautiful and sexy hot teacher? How isn't it horrible? And then the principle does nothing!? Really? When she knows that the kid is still alive in her tummy?

Entity

Posted by Entity 12 years ago Report

Did you really expect anything different on a site dominated by vore. Think about what you said for a mintue....

delet0h2b69

Posted by delet0h2b69 12 years ago Report

Haha I love people like you who are so narrow minded to think that everyone loves watching people die and that vore is always a one way trip. I did think about it along while my friend and I wouldn't change a single word to my question.

Entity

Posted by Entity 12 years ago Report

I'm not narrow minded but neither am i a person who complains about every story they've read which they don't like. I've seen your comments on other stories and pictures. Grow the hell up,if you don't like it don't read it.

delet0h2b69

Posted by delet0h2b69 12 years ago Report

Wow you must get around a lot? And no I don't complain about every story I don't like. I do admit though that I do complain about some but that's irrelevant. And the few stories I have commented on like this one are and that I've received comments like 'well if you don't like it don't read' are kind of pointless. How are we as readers supposed to know if we don't like it of the tags are misleading? Especially on this story? I can assure you that I would've never posted a comment had the tags been actually accurate so don't blame me for you getting comments like this.

Entity

Posted by Entity 12 years ago Report

I'm not blaming you for anything i'm just saying that most often than not vore stories and picutres which go the whole way end with digestion and it's fatal,it's a lot more common than reforming. So you should expect it.

delet0h2b69

Posted by delet0h2b69 12 years ago Report

I understand. And I realize that fatal vore is more common, but there are plenty of non-fatal and /or reformation stories out there as well. I'm sorry if I insulted you I'm just stating that I wished that there was a warning, as I didn't know what I was getting into while reading. And yes I do admit I do comment on a lot of stuff hehe, but that's just me being an advocate for life and justice ^_^. The story was well written, but I was very sad about it :(

Entity

Posted by Entity 12 years ago Report

Well in the future i'll make sure to post more tags and just a word of advice,when you post on someone's story it's probably best to say something like "interesting read" instead of "I hated it". You could really damage someones confidence that way.Be careful with the words you use...:)

delet0h2b69

Posted by delet0h2b69 12 years ago Report

Oh have I posted that on someone's story? If I have I probably didn't intentionally mean it, but that would be nice if you could post tags in the future. :(

KR75

Posted by KR75 11 years ago Report

lol just read that convo below...I think it was a great story and I would love to see more. Love the fact you had some diversity in the story. Got to love those black women!!!

Entity

Posted by Entity 11 years ago Report

Thank you for saying so, perhaps in the future there will be a sequel of sorts but who knows. XD

It is a bit of a funny conversation isn't it :)

Komodorazor

Posted by Komodorazor 7 years ago Report

Excellent story :)

Entity

Posted by Entity 7 years ago Report

Thanks :)