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Title: These Exotic Sweets - Part 1
Continuity: A Lady's Delights/The World of Society
Paring: F/F
Tags: vore, shrunken person, femslash, romance, alternate history
Synopsis: Cassandra invites three guests to her home who wish to arrange for a new shipment of Cassandra's shrunken delights. There are other desires afoot, however, while behind the scenes, Estelle continues to harbor continuing anger towards her employer...
Notes: Oh, look, a third story in this world! It appears that Cassandra's intrusion upon Estelle's sleep in the previous chapter has consequences. We also get a bit more of a flavor (heh) of this alternate world that our characters live in. I'm still trying to develop my idea of what this country and its surroundings are like, so that will likely get further development as we go along.
Posted by Indighost 12 years ago Report
more excellent writing. Could use some proofreading but not a big deal. A lot of characters introduced here, i really wish the chapter was longer! Also, the way you describe the women's faces is quite beautiful. Overall, I was reminded of books i have read by elizabeth gaskell. You are a really good writer mukat!
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Posted by Mukat 12 years ago Report
I feel more comfortable writing shorter pieces, and this was already getting fairly long, so I ended up splitting the story I had planned apart. I've looked into Gaskell, she definitely seems to write about themes that I would find interesting. And I do see how these stories might make you think of her writing, I think. ^^ Thank you! I'm flattered that you think so highly of my stories!
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