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Page 12 of a commission for trh7323
Honestly, I feel like this one was done sloppy. I took a lot of copy/paste shortcuts to cut out some time, and in hindsight I probably should have just painted through. And for whatever reason, I shaded page 13 first. Maybe I got burned out.
Anyway, there is a lot going on in this pic, it really feels like panels are crammed together BUT I think the flow and storytelling of the page wasn't sacrificed at all.
For working only in SAI, I'm impressed. I like SAI a lot better. There are a few tools I miss, but overall I'm really pleased :D
Okay so I need an honest opinion/critique on the last panel. Her tits and ass are shrinking, did I capture it right or is there a better technique to capture I should have used?
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Posted by ESFantasia 12 years ago Report
well done.I think you did it well. any clue when the next page will be up?
Posted by Shryland 12 years ago Report
Just uploaded the next page X3
Posted by ESFantasia 12 years ago Report
I saw xD
Posted by magicnames 12 years ago Report
Well I think it's hard to do growing/shrinking in one panel, so the way you did was the best as I see it. Good work
Posted by Shryland 12 years ago Report
So have the top look like its still filled out with big breasts, but show small breasts in the cups?
Posted by deletedaccount505 12 years ago Report
I don't think this is sloppy at all.
Posted by xblurp 12 years ago Report
Oh this is just a delicious pic.I'm sure the succubus would agree.I absolutely love vore like this.
Posted by Shryland 12 years ago Report
So in other words get rid of the detail and keep the breast and ass in dull colors?? I was thinking maybe get rid of the size differentiation details, just have the final size and keep the outlines that represent the original sizes.
Posted by gamma555 12 years ago Report
Now, there is something positively stunning about this page and concept to me; the idea of absorbing her very body mass through her lips is just amazing!
I don't know if this was your or trh7323's idea, but kudos to either one, or both for the combined effort and excellently portrayed!
Posted by TW 12 years ago Report
Comes across as though she is growing rather than shrinking to me.
Posted by Shryland 12 years ago Report
Yea I was worried about that, and looking at it more I see it. Good thing I thought ahead and put those "effects" on separate layers.
Posted by Liz 12 years ago Report
Interesting indeed :)
Posted by 0Anesthetic4u 12 years ago Report
I think you fleshed out the origional sizes too well. I mean if you look at the her left boob(on our right) it looks almost like an eye with bags under it. I think it would be more visually concies just to stick with shadeless outlines.
Posted by Shryland 12 years ago Report
Lol its either too much or too little. I had to look at it a few times before I finally saw what you are saying. Yea ill fix it here soon, dull colors seem to be the way to go
Posted by voreboy0329 12 years ago Report
I love it. It took me a second to realize they were shrinking but it wasnt that hard to figure out. Id say you did it well
Posted by Shryland 12 years ago Report
Thanks :) but you shouldn't have to sit there and try to figure out what's going on. You should get it in one take, and that's fault on my part. All will be fixxed soon :)
Posted by voreboy0329 12 years ago Report
Well to be fair this is extremely well done art and an amazing series so far. I think I speak for alot of people when I say its no biggie
Posted by Gypa 12 years ago Report
Last pannel sexy as hell. ;)