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In a brief flashback, the phonecall is revealed in its entirety. There's trouble about and it could spell doom for all the deities, let alone the mortal realms. Later, thinking that he's safe, Grim and Lee go exploring, only to run into precisely the thing that Grim was hiding from. Who is the strange girl and what does she want from the Reaper?
As always, comments and critiques are massively appreciated.
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Posted by Eolwin 12 years ago Report
I don't have anything to say, except that this is great! The universe you're describing is becoming more and more interesting.
Posted by Imrhys 12 years ago Report
It needs more proof reading and attention to formating issues with the transfer to here, but I'm interested in where this is going <3
Posted by Meowmix6 12 years ago Report
Yeah, I've noticed the issue with formatting. I'm not sure how to get it to stop doing that. I type it up with the paragraphs indented and everything, but for some reason it gets rid of some of them when I transfer it over. Any ideas on how to fix that?
Posted by Imrhys 12 years ago Report
Play with it. At each point it breaks down or changes, see what is there and see if you can change it. My last story took over an hour to get the formating to stabilize because of a conflict between open office and here. It just takes some experimentation. Sometimes you have to triple space between paragraphs to get them to stick.
For here though, I'd say don't worry so much about indenting as double spacing between paragraphs.
Posted by Meowmix6 12 years ago Report
Sounds like a plan. I'll be sure to implement it in the next story. Thanks for the tip!